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Array ( [sid] => 50561 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suffocation [time] => 2004-06-05 17:45:31 [hometext] => She left me through all the grief and observed it...she knew I was hurting then came back...and thought I was ok....then left I dont get it does she like seeing me in pain...does she laugh inside...knowing that I have no feelings, knowing the have died... [bodytext] => "Suffocation"

Unforgiving and haunting
This spirit of one you thought at first was nothing
It's hard to believe some things
when they don't seem real
It's so hard I know to understand
it's you they want and feel
Just forget the fact you came here
forget it's you, they smell fear
you asked them to let you go...
you asked to be set free
you turned your head and closed your eyes
and visualised it wasnt you, but me
I know your hate for me is strong
but still I did nothing wrong
I cared about you and still do
so don't think I put this upon you
you didn't want to listen
I tried so hard to say
you throw yourself upon every guy
when you should just stay out of their way
I feel your pain I've expierienced
but it's you that ***** up it's you who wouldn't listen
I don't know why I still try and help you
But I guess your lucky, I know what your going through
But I could just let you suffer (like most people do with voo doo)
But I guess I'm a real friend...
But I CHOOSE to be [comments] => 4 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 16 [informant] => living_in_my_dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
Suffocation

Contributed by living_in_my_dream on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:45:31 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



"Suffocation"

Unforgiving and haunting
This spirit of one you thought at first was nothing
It's hard to believe some things
when they don't seem real
It's so hard I know to understand
it's you they want and feel
Just forget the fact you came here
forget it's you, they smell fear
you asked them to let you go...
you asked to be set free
you turned your head and closed your eyes
and visualised it wasnt you, but me
I know your hate for me is strong
but still I did nothing wrong
I cared about you and still do
so don't think I put this upon you
you didn't want to listen
I tried so hard to say
you throw yourself upon every guy
when you should just stay out of their way
I feel your pain I've expierienced
but it's you that ***** up it's you who wouldn't listen
I don't know why I still try and help you
But I guess your lucky, I know what your going through
But I could just let you suffer (like most people do with voo doo)
But I guess I'm a real friend...
But I CHOOSE to be




Copyright © living_in_my_dream ... [ 2004-06-05 17:45:31]
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Re: Suffocation (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:48:31 PM AEST
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real friends are hard to find...someone right now wants to play the game with me...but I'm too tired. He knows I have deep feelings, and he flirts around...never really there but not leaving either. so it's me that has to use the blade, make the cut...and it's just so hard. I thought he was back and it was Christmas day....oh well. I loved your poem...forget that anal orafice! LOL


Re: Suffocation (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:58:03 PM AEST
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nice flow and rhyme.


Re: Suffocation (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 12:22:17 AM AEST
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Good job on this one. I can feel the emotion as i read it. I only wish i could be as good as you. Keep it up


Re: Suffocation (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 01:09:27 AM AEST
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ya most can be fairweather friends, there when its convienent not there when needed.
great poem Im sure many can relate A++++




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