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[title] => Thank You
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[bodytext] => I'm not very good at saying thank you, especially in rhyme
As for writing poetry, for me, it's been a long time
you befriended my four little ones, and have shown them you care
restoring their faith in women, for which a long time had not been there
tis a long story how they lost it, and here I will not pursue
these words are for me to say, Carrie, from my heart..... I thank you
This is something I have just written on the quick to thank a young lady that has befriended my children. It's a long story, but they had lost faith in females due to the female who should be dominant in their lives appearing to not be interested in them at all. By being a friend, even in a short time, Carrie has shown them that this is not generalised to all females, and I have been seeing little changes for the better within my children in this respect over this short time. For this, I thank her very much.
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Thank You
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Mick_Puttock
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Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:48:29 PM in AEST
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I'm not very good at saying thank you, especially in rhyme
As for writing poetry, for me, it's been a long time
you befriended my four little ones, and have shown them you care
restoring their faith in women, for which a long time had not been there
tis a long story how they lost it, and here I will not pursue
these words are for me to say, Carrie, from my heart..... I thank you
This is something I have just written on the quick to thank a young lady that has befriended my children. It's a long story, but they had lost faith in females due to the female who should be dominant in their lives appearing to not be interested in them at all. By being a friend, even in a short time, Carrie has shown them that this is not generalised to all females, and I have been seeing little changes for the better within my children in this respect over this short time. For this, I thank her very much.
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Re: Thank You
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by shelby on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 04:11:36 PM AEST
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a wonderful thankyou to this friend who is loving your children how wonderful
Michelle |
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 04:13:20 PM AEST
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O I loved this....It's so nice of that women to help your children out...and Im sorry to hear they never really had a mother figure in there lives...that was agreat write...I think every women mother friend or anythinglike that...should receive a thank you like that....because it would uplift there spirits and make them happy they chose to help others out...think about others then theirsleves...
great write....
much love,
Dani |
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 04:29:22 PM AEST
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very lovely words for someone who showed that we are here for the children our future
shari |
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:46:27 PM AEST
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Awww. How sweet. That's so cool that she befriended your kids. I know it'll mean a lot to the family.
Lots of love,
Chelsea |
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:48:11 PM AEST
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| Mick how very touching I do hope she reads it! Its a very special lady that would do this for them! Great work! Christina |
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Re: Thank You
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:53:56 PM AEST
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Awww Mick...this is beautiful..I'm sure Carrie would love it and appreciate the gesture... and I'm sure the tribe just loves it...
NOW, young man, the next step is dinner...and that movie....:>)
Then, SHE will be thanking YOU.....*wink* The kids also.....lol...
(((((((((((hugs)))))))))))
Jen
P/S..Good to see you writing again..thank Carrie for me too...lol
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Re: Thank You
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by venkat on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:58:24 AM AEST
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| This is beautifully touching..respects to Carrie..thank you Mick for for sharing your happy feelings..our best wishes to you all. :-) venkat |
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Re: Thank You
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:58:57 AM AEST
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This is a heart felt thank you to one who gave much to ones who have so far to go. I know of that path, both sides.
Thank you for sharing.
Chris |
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Re: Thank You
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by poetrygodslove on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 03:19:35 PM AEST
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| It is very sad that the woman did what she did and that carrie has come in their life and brought some sunshine. it is good of you to say thanks.. beautiful poem. sandy |
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by KSUHO11 on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:56:14 PM AEST
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Glad to hear that things on looking on the up for you. Hold on to her she sounds like keeper. Best of Luck.
A.J. |
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:27:49 PM AEST
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sweetly beautiful mick! did you show her? hum hum hum!? hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Thank You
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by emystar on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:19:51 AM AEST
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Very good work here,
huggs, luv,
emy |
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