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Array ( [sid] => 50536 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just Can't Take It [time] => 2004-06-05 13:21:45 [hometext] => There's nothing left. [bodytext] => Hiding in shadows
The world disappears
Nothing for comfort
Forget all my fears

Drowning in sorrow
Drunk on despair
Filter out feeling
With lies on the air

Tortured and nameless
Soul without worth
Tired and shameful
Regretting my birth

No more to wish for
Kindness too few
Nothing to live for
Wish I were gone too. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Saitou-sama [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Just Can't Take It

Contributed by Saitou-sama on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:21:45 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Hiding in shadows
The world disappears
Nothing for comfort
Forget all my fears

Drowning in sorrow
Drunk on despair
Filter out feeling
With lies on the air

Tortured and nameless
Soul without worth
Tired and shameful
Regretting my birth

No more to wish for
Kindness too few
Nothing to live for
Wish I were gone too.

Copyright © Saitou-sama ... [ 2004-06-05 13:21:45]
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Re: Just Can't Take It (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:30:05 PM AEST
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very powerful words you express here, you have a real talent for expression, ... you are wrong there is so much left for you , sometimes you just have to look a little harder to see it,
takecare, great write

pixie xx

Re: Just Can't Take It (User Rating: 1 )
by BlazeingHeart on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:30:05 PM AEST
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i extremly like this poem, it describes what normal people go through and you are a very gifted writer.

Re: Just Can't Take It (User Rating: 1 )
by Jolly on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:37:31 PM AEST
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read Red, Red bubbles. That was me lying in the tub just a few weeks ago. But now the world has spun around and I thank God I didn't die...Please...Please remember things always change. Life is change and we never know what's around the corner...if we choose suicide we'll never find out.

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