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Array ( [sid] => 50526 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In His Sick Mind [time] => 2004-06-05 11:49:26 [hometext] => This one is about the man or should I say Monster that raped me. [bodytext] => There are many revolting things for you to find,
Preying on innocent victims is how he unwinds,
Plotting and scheming all day and all night,
To think of ways to inflict new tirades of fear and fright.

I wonder if he was born this way,
If it happened to someone he loved what would he say?
People say what goes around comes around,
I hope someone violates him and throws him to the ground.

Could he really believe that I liked what he was doing,
Why couldn’t he see it was a child with dreams that he was screwing,
Somewhere in his twisted brain,
He thought I actually asked for this kind of pain.

I’d love to get in his mind and do some permanent damage,
Much ,much more than his sickened mind could manage,
I’d love to make him feel exactly how I felt,
I’d give him the hand which I was dealt.

All he knows is how to use and abuse,
Is he that less of a man that he has to prove,
Prove how big and powerful he can be,
By trapping his victims and setting himself free.

He is a messed up, poor excuse for a man,
By raping me and taking all he can,
A real man wouldn’t need to flex his power,
By crushing people in his hand as he would a flower.


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In His Sick Mind

Contributed by pixie on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:49:26 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



There are many revolting things for you to find,
Preying on innocent victims is how he unwinds,
Plotting and scheming all day and all night,
To think of ways to inflict new tirades of fear and fright.

I wonder if he was born this way,
If it happened to someone he loved what would he say?
People say what goes around comes around,
I hope someone violates him and throws him to the ground.

Could he really believe that I liked what he was doing,
Why couldn’t he see it was a child with dreams that he was screwing,
Somewhere in his twisted brain,
He thought I actually asked for this kind of pain.

I’d love to get in his mind and do some permanent damage,
Much ,much more than his sickened mind could manage,
I’d love to make him feel exactly how I felt,
I’d give him the hand which I was dealt.

All he knows is how to use and abuse,
Is he that less of a man that he has to prove,
Prove how big and powerful he can be,
By trapping his victims and setting himself free.

He is a messed up, poor excuse for a man,
By raping me and taking all he can,
A real man wouldn’t need to flex his power,
By crushing people in his hand as he would a flower.






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Re: In His Sick Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by krisseee on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 12:14:18 PM AEST
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a good write taken from a bad experience, always spells success.


Re: In His Sick Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 06:21:09 PM AEST
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You're a very stong person. I witness the strength in every stroke of the letter. I respect you for the honesty that trembles my heart and soul. And I'm sorry that there are people like that out there, Who want power hate and control.

I will pray.


Re: In His Sick Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 03:32:05 AM AEST
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He is a very sick monster!
I can relate in a way but I was too young to know hwat was happening when My uncle abused me.
Hang in there as he will meet his match someday.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: In His Sick Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 10:12:16 AM AEST
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Very good write... saddly enough, I can really relate to this one. I am so sorry that this happened to you. I know the pain and the emotional disturbance this causes. pm me if you ever need to...I will understand.




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