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[sid] => 50521
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Once Again, I Failed
[time] => 2004-06-05 10:21:13
[hometext] => I give up. I've tried 3 frieking times to slit. But no. I'm stuck here!
[bodytext] => Trapped in
a crumbling world,
inside a
worthless body.
Reminders
up and down my arms of
how cruel my life is.
I want to escape,
but God must
have a plan.
Three times I've tried to
escape this torture,
but I couldn't leave.
Condemned to
live
forever and ever
in this
ridiculous society.
Have to be careful
everyday
to not let anyone see
my insanity
or the scars,
or this torture will become
even more of
a nightmare.
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 214
[topic] => 36
[informant] => WorthlesSanity666
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 13
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
)
Once Again, I Failed
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:21:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Trapped in
a crumbling world,
inside a
worthless body.
Reminders
up and down my arms of
how cruel my life is.
I want to escape,
but God must
have a plan.
Three times I've tried to
escape this torture,
but I couldn't leave.
Condemned to
live
forever and ever
in this
ridiculous society.
Have to be careful
everyday
to not let anyone see
my insanity
or the scars,
or this torture will become
even more of
a nightmare.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-06-05 10:21:13]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Once Again, I Failed
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by bite_me on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:33:57 AM AEST
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Hey, very nice poem, i know the feeling, just hope you might be able to find a lil happyness here and there, and im sure God does have a plan for you!! :/ ..thanx for shareing
*hugz*
Ella
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Re: Once Again, I Failed
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by Suz on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:54:51 AM AEST
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| I have 12 cuts of my own on my wrist under a pink wristband but I still will never understand suicide all the way. But this poem is beautiful. |
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Re: Once Again, I Failed
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:56:18 AM AEST
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This is an awesome write!! i feel this way myself at times.. hang in there there is always Hope you will get through this..
Peace and hope
JENNA |
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Re: Once Again, I Failed
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by Britty on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:58:39 AM AEST
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hey..i loved your poem. Just remeber this, your not worthless and god does have a plan for you. he wants you to be happy. belive me....i have been down you road before and i got out. just keep the hope up!! im here for ya!!
like they say **hugs* |
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Re: Once Again, I Failed
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by pixie on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 11:33:11 AM AEST
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Greatly worded, your pain is so raw and yes he does have a plan for you.... I believe that to cherise real happiness and appreciate it, you must first experience a bit of pain, things will get better, just hang in there and keep writing, cos if you're still writing your still here surviving
takecare
Pixie xx |
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Re: Once Again, I Failed
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by Saitou-sama on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 01:02:56 PM AEST
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I don't really believe in God, but if you've tried three times and failed, then there probably is something you need to do. I do believe in reincarnation and if you do happen to go through with suicide, then the next life will be unrewarding.
I really hope you feel better. If you ever EVER need someone to talk to, I'm here. ::hugs:: |
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Re: Once Again, I Failed
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by Rhei76 on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 06:08:42 PM AEST
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| A beautiful structure Of self pain. My prayers Are for ya. Peace out, |
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Re: Once Again, I Failed
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by Naughtygurl on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 12:43:06 PM AEST
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hey I liked your poem.... I feel the same way. I would have cut myself as much as you have except some one made me promise not to.... deppresion and love..... this sucks.... My friend britty she commented on this poem to and she doesn't know anything about this subject ... " personaly I think shes a ditz. But I hope you write more poetry... your good.... And I agree wit britty your not hopeless your here for a reason , theres a reason for everything!
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