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Array ( [sid] => 50481 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Age is Just a Number [time] => 2004-06-05 02:00:52 [hometext] => This was written for my friend after an incident happened to her. [bodytext] => You said you wanted to be with me
You said I was gorgeous, I was beautiful, and I was everything you wanted
You told me what I wanted to hear
I trusted you that you wouldn’t hurt me like everyone else in my past has
I thought since you were older you would be different from the rest
So I let my guard down and opened up to you, which was actually my biggest mistake!
You used my body
Deceived my mind
And spun my world into a blur
I looked beyond your past and your history
Figured that you’re a different person now
But you,
You couldn’t look past a number
A number that doesn’t mean anything!
A number wont give you love and happiness
But I could’ve!
But you threw it all away for the bull***** excuse of “age”
I trusted you and all you did was hurt me
You made me feel cheap and used
I cried my eyes out over you
Why? I don’t even know!
You’re not worth it!
You’re not worth my tears
You’re not worth my time
You don’t deserve me
So I’ll move on…
Get over you
Down the road when you are sad and alone
Maybe then you will realize how great of a thing you could’ve had
And how you threw it away over a number
By then you won’t matter to me anymore
You will be forgotten in my past with all the other bad memories
I will no longer waste my tears on you
I will move on and be happy again
You’re the immature one after these games you played like a high school boy
I just keep telling myself you’re not worth it and you didn’t want me
Cause if you were, age wouldn’t be an issue!
So ***** it, I’m done with it all
I’m done with you!
If age is all you see then I’m gone!
I can do better than you!
After all, age is just a number!
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Age is Just a Number

Contributed by fastpitchqt on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:00:52 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



You said you wanted to be with me
You said I was gorgeous, I was beautiful, and I was everything you wanted
You told me what I wanted to hear
I trusted you that you wouldn’t hurt me like everyone else in my past has
I thought since you were older you would be different from the rest
So I let my guard down and opened up to you, which was actually my biggest mistake!
You used my body
Deceived my mind
And spun my world into a blur
I looked beyond your past and your history
Figured that you’re a different person now
But you,
You couldn’t look past a number
A number that doesn’t mean anything!
A number wont give you love and happiness
But I could’ve!
But you threw it all away for the bull***** excuse of “age”
I trusted you and all you did was hurt me
You made me feel cheap and used
I cried my eyes out over you
Why? I don’t even know!
You’re not worth it!
You’re not worth my tears
You’re not worth my time
You don’t deserve me
So I’ll move on…
Get over you
Down the road when you are sad and alone
Maybe then you will realize how great of a thing you could’ve had
And how you threw it away over a number
By then you won’t matter to me anymore
You will be forgotten in my past with all the other bad memories
I will no longer waste my tears on you
I will move on and be happy again
You’re the immature one after these games you played like a high school boy
I just keep telling myself you’re not worth it and you didn’t want me
Cause if you were, age wouldn’t be an issue!
So ***** it, I’m done with it all
I’m done with you!
If age is all you see then I’m gone!
I can do better than you!
After all, age is just a number!




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Re: Age is Just a Number (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:09:38 AM AEST
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strong emotions, nicely written. I can feel what you are conveying.


Re: Age is Just a Number (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:20:36 AM AEST
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wow, that was I dont know...so much emotion put into it...I loves it...Im sorry that that had to happen....its liek my sister...but yeah,...that was a great write...keep it up, keep it coming..
read and comment my stuff if you want
Dani


Re: Age is Just a Number (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:41:07 AM AEST
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The games do make it worse... The flow on betrayal is captured so well.




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