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Array ( [sid] => 50456 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stuck [time] => 2004-06-04 20:45:55 [hometext] => Please Comment [bodytext] => What happened to your happiness
I don't know what to do anymore
it's just coming at me like a train
while I'm stuck in the tracks,
I just don't know how to get away,
Please help me to understand
Just how you feel
cause I'm no mind reader
I always feel like I'm intruding
on this life your supposed to have
A life that used to be filled with hopelessness
that seemed like a never ending road
with no one passing
to help you find your way
the road ended when we met
I thought it had
but your filled again
with that same hopelessness
driving you back into the ground
I want to find a way to help you out
but I can't help you
If you won't help yourself
I thought I could help you
but you don't seem to want help
I don't know what to do
I'm still trapped in the train tracks
With the train coming at me
and I don't know how to get away
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MnMnMsrcool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Stuck

Contributed by MnMnMsrcool on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 08:45:55 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

What happened to your happiness
I don't know what to do anymore
it's just coming at me like a train
while I'm stuck in the tracks,
I just don't know how to get away,
Please help me to understand
Just how you feel
cause I'm no mind reader
I always feel like I'm intruding
on this life your supposed to have
A life that used to be filled with hopelessness
that seemed like a never ending road
with no one passing
to help you find your way
the road ended when we met
I thought it had
but your filled again
with that same hopelessness
driving you back into the ground
I want to find a way to help you out
but I can't help you
If you won't help yourself
I thought I could help you
but you don't seem to want help
I don't know what to do
I'm still trapped in the train tracks
With the train coming at me
and I don't know how to get away

Copyright © MnMnMsrcool ... [ 2004-06-04 20:45:55]
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Re: Stuck (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 08:48:59 PM AEST
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I think you express yourself well. Depression is a difficult thing to overcome, and especially impossible for anyone else to help you out of. You were able to relay that hopelessness well.

Re: Stuck (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 08:55:55 PM AEST
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a very well written piece.

Re: Stuck (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:38:12 AM AEST
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Well Written....you can't save those who do not want to be saved...get off those tracks before the train wrecks.

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