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Array ( [sid] => 50429 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Living in hell Waiting for heaven [time] => 2004-06-04 17:32:45 [hometext] => ~Hell~Heaven~ [bodytext] => if i smile and hum
maybe my sadness and soar throat
will vansih
soar from all those tears
the shouts
useless
but i dont stop
happy and bright
a girl is ment to be
but i dont think iam a girl
an angel from god
sent to be cursed with other peoples problems
i realised im not sleeping
im still here
hello
im from yesterday
an eternity away
lay down
rest in peace
not to be woken by a shoulder or a tear
i need someone to talk to
but they seem to be doing all the talking
do they ever silence the words of vain
looks dont seem to be important
faith is what i cannot understand
where do we stand
inbetween
or just not at all
we have no choices anymore
there already made
we are being played
like a game
but i feel broken like a toy
and i cannot be fixed
because im not really broken
im dead
and my tears are froze
and im not breathing
ive stopped trying to live
and forget the world
who cares so much about vanity
the world is hell
im waiting for heaven

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Living in hell Waiting for heaven

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 05:32:45 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

if i smile and hum
maybe my sadness and soar throat
will vansih
soar from all those tears
the shouts
useless
but i dont stop
happy and bright
a girl is ment to be
but i dont think iam a girl
an angel from god
sent to be cursed with other peoples problems
i realised im not sleeping
im still here
hello
im from yesterday
an eternity away
lay down
rest in peace
not to be woken by a shoulder or a tear
i need someone to talk to
but they seem to be doing all the talking
do they ever silence the words of vain
looks dont seem to be important
faith is what i cannot understand
where do we stand
inbetween
or just not at all
we have no choices anymore
there already made
we are being played
like a game
but i feel broken like a toy
and i cannot be fixed
because im not really broken
im dead
and my tears are froze
and im not breathing
ive stopped trying to live
and forget the world
who cares so much about vanity
the world is hell
im waiting for heaven

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-06-04 17:32:45]
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Re: Living in hell Waiting for heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 03:30:41 PM AEST
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Beatiful!!! Absolutely BEAUTIFUL!! You're an awesome writer, girlie! Thanks for sharing that....

Blessings
Love, Jenna

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