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But evil lives within those gates
A heavy hand snuffs out the light
While shadowed wraiths await the night

And on the walls defenders stand
Now looking down upon the land
They’re seeing all that moves and glides
When darkness comes they see the lies

They strain to see their enemies
But darkened souls is all they see
They’re standing there a show of force
Awaiting night to run its course

When something stirs within the night
The sound of beasts while taking flight
And crawling hordes approach the gates
All fueled by fire and breathing hate

And standing there within the horde
From hell is spawned this demon lord
It’s violent eyes shine deep and red
Anticipating future dead

And with a howl it all begins
The ranting raving future sins
With tearing claws and grinding teeth
They twist and turn and dive beneath

And bursting up upon the walls
They tear and kick until it falls
Then climbing over shattered stone
They set to steal this kingdom's thrown

But in their way there stands a king
Upon his hand a holy ring
And with him ride the knights of old
A new direction now unfolds

With pounding drums within their chests
The hordes are forced to charge the crest
The beast intends to have the crown
The King intends it hell ward bound

The final clash of claws and steel
The fates are forced to now reveal
The victor takes all in the end
The beast or he who does defend

And with his sword raised to the sky
A fatal blow a shattered lie
The beast is torn from limb to limb
As holy fire burns deep within

And now it comes, the final blow
A curtain calls that’s come to show
That evil climbs up from the pit
But on the thrown will never sit

The King he stands victorious
The demons hordes have all dispersed
A mighty blow he’s struck this day
And saved the souls of Fyndalai

Michael David Morash
Copyright © 2003 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 31 [informant] => mdmorash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
Battle of Fyndalai

Contributed by mdmorash on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:05:33 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



Morning comes to those who wait
But evil lives within those gates
A heavy hand snuffs out the light
While shadowed wraiths await the night

And on the walls defenders stand
Now looking down upon the land
They’re seeing all that moves and glides
When darkness comes they see the lies

They strain to see their enemies
But darkened souls is all they see
They’re standing there a show of force
Awaiting night to run its course

When something stirs within the night
The sound of beasts while taking flight
And crawling hordes approach the gates
All fueled by fire and breathing hate

And standing there within the horde
From hell is spawned this demon lord
It’s violent eyes shine deep and red
Anticipating future dead

And with a howl it all begins
The ranting raving future sins
With tearing claws and grinding teeth
They twist and turn and dive beneath

And bursting up upon the walls
They tear and kick until it falls
Then climbing over shattered stone
They set to steal this kingdom's thrown

But in their way there stands a king
Upon his hand a holy ring
And with him ride the knights of old
A new direction now unfolds

With pounding drums within their chests
The hordes are forced to charge the crest
The beast intends to have the crown
The King intends it hell ward bound

The final clash of claws and steel
The fates are forced to now reveal
The victor takes all in the end
The beast or he who does defend

And with his sword raised to the sky
A fatal blow a shattered lie
The beast is torn from limb to limb
As holy fire burns deep within

And now it comes, the final blow
A curtain calls that’s come to show
That evil climbs up from the pit
But on the thrown will never sit

The King he stands victorious
The demons hordes have all dispersed
A mighty blow he’s struck this day
And saved the souls of Fyndalai

Michael David Morash
Copyright © 2003




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Re: Battle of Fyndalai (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:13:55 PM AEST
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that is one kick ass story/poem.excellent flow of words,your very talented.
~vermillion~


Re: Battle of Fyndalai (User Rating: 1 )
by buchi on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:11:52 AM AEST
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But on the thrown will never sit
Was that spelling error!! or...


Re: Battle of Fyndalai (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 31st July 2004 @ 12:52:35 PM AEST
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great story, hugs n' love nessa

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