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Array ( [sid] => 50379 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a fathers scorn [time] => 2004-06-04 10:16:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => the pub is closed
the drunk is out
lurking for a victum
instead he does not look far
comes home to beat his wife
as there only child sits
high up in her room
crying as the screams get louder
shes never came down
before to look hear father in the face
ask him whats he doin
and why he hurts her mother
but this time its different
for she sneeks out of her room
walking down the stairs she sees what really goes on in the room
the screams of her mother echo through the house
and the tears of her child are fallin on the steps
finally the father leaves
and the mother starts to cry
as the child goes in that room
to see whats become of her mother
nothing but an empty face her mother is not there
for she is in a place of pain
and wants to be left alone
the child goes to bed that night not wanting to be alone
but when the morning comes
she finds her mother in the tub
one slit on the right wrist
to bleed all through the floor
one slit to the left wrist
to make her puls stop
layin in the tub she fines her mother finally in peace
and she does not want to desturbe her
so she leaves her mother alone
they barry her in the ground on the eve of a full moon
now father does not have a punching bag
what will he do to her?
the pub is closed the drunk is out
lurking for a victum
he comes home to find his only child sleeping
sweetly in the bed
he pulls her up and beats her down
till her blood so sweet seeps arcoss his hand
then walks into that room and leaves her there alone
she realizes she found that place
the place of pain her mother saw
and every night her father comes
to pick her up and beat her down
but one night is different
for as he opens the door she pulls a triger
and hears the shot
see his surpised face
there is no more pain just this room they've put ther in
and now she is at peace
she found her happy place
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a fathers scorn

Contributed by AmaNdAsHepArD on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:16:27 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



the pub is closed
the drunk is out
lurking for a victum
instead he does not look far
comes home to beat his wife
as there only child sits
high up in her room
crying as the screams get louder
shes never came down
before to look hear father in the face
ask him whats he doin
and why he hurts her mother
but this time its different
for she sneeks out of her room
walking down the stairs she sees what really goes on in the room
the screams of her mother echo through the house
and the tears of her child are fallin on the steps
finally the father leaves
and the mother starts to cry
as the child goes in that room
to see whats become of her mother
nothing but an empty face her mother is not there
for she is in a place of pain
and wants to be left alone
the child goes to bed that night not wanting to be alone
but when the morning comes
she finds her mother in the tub
one slit on the right wrist
to bleed all through the floor
one slit to the left wrist
to make her puls stop
layin in the tub she fines her mother finally in peace
and she does not want to desturbe her
so she leaves her mother alone
they barry her in the ground on the eve of a full moon
now father does not have a punching bag
what will he do to her?
the pub is closed the drunk is out
lurking for a victum
he comes home to find his only child sleeping
sweetly in the bed
he pulls her up and beats her down
till her blood so sweet seeps arcoss his hand
then walks into that room and leaves her there alone
she realizes she found that place
the place of pain her mother saw
and every night her father comes
to pick her up and beat her down
but one night is different
for as he opens the door she pulls a triger
and hears the shot
see his surpised face
there is no more pain just this room they've put ther in
and now she is at peace
she found her happy place




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Re: a fathers scorn (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:35:37 AM AEST
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wow.. verry sad and disturbing, and a great write at the same time. nice job...


Re: a fathers scorn (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:00:40 PM AEST
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very intense and so sad, very deep and very well written,

pixie xx




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