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[title] => Who Would Care?
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[bodytext] => I died today…but that’s not why I’m so very sad Not one person seemed to care, not even my own dad I watch them carry my body, the grave is its direction It seems I wasn’t loved enough to get a funeral procession Something must be wrong I think: Maybe I just missed it! But that is not the case…they lower me into the pit No one’s there to say goodbye…just the two men shovelling dirt My soul now feels so lonely; God I wish this didn’t hurt I go to my house, to see why my parents weren’t even there They’re playing with my brother…this pain is too much to bear It seems I was forgotten way before I grabbed that gun No one showed up to say goodbye, not even the shining sun I head to see my best friend, why couldn’t he even come? He’s on a date with his girlfriend…I’m starting to feel so numb I head to see my girlfriend; maybe she just couldn’t make it… She’s in bed with one of my friends; my soul now feels so naked I go see one last person: a girl I loved so much… But I never let her know; I was too afraid of denial’s touch She’s sitting in her room…her eyes are so very red She’s shaking so bad it’s hard for her to stay upon her bed Her sheets: they’re soaked with too many heartfelt tears Her door is locked, they’re knocks she doesn’t seem to hear Over and over, she just keeps asking herself why: She never got to say I love you, or hear that last goodbye Scared I jerk up straight and find I’m sitting in my bed Whew…it was just a dream, but I can still see her inside my head I try and try but it seems that I cannot fall back asleep Alone I sit and think of life…silently I start to weep I wonder when that last day comes, when I finally say goodbye Would anybody notice …Who would care? …Who would cry? I vow right then that if I die, if something does go wrong… Inside I want this girl to know: I’ve loved her all along [comments] => 6 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MilitaryPrince [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
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