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Array ( [sid] => 50349 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I miss you when [time] => 2004-06-04 02:56:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I miss you when I awake, every day, every...single..day...
I know your better off.
because you told me I would never be what your looking for.
I only hope that he treasures you
I hope that he obsseses over you
I hope that he values you...
the way I have...the way I do
And I know that im not;
handsome enough to catch your eye
funny enough to make you laugh
or talented enough to entertain you...
so I tried...
harder than any man ever will for you....
but I failed.... apperently....
the only thing I ever achieved,
was to make myself completely yours.
I gave to you everything, as much as I had
and you only wanted more...
so I tried harder and harder... I gave you all
but once you realized, that you had all of me...
there was no challenge, so you got bored.
and im only sorry for one thing....
im only sorry that I couldnt grow to be what you needed me to be,
to make you stay in love with me


I miss you when my heart beats
I miss you when I breathe
I miss you when I close my eyes
I miss you why'd you leave.... [comments] => 7 [counter] => 283 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
I miss you when

Contributed by holderofthestone on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 02:56:16 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I miss you when I awake, every day, every...single..day...
I know your better off.
because you told me I would never be what your looking for.
I only hope that he treasures you
I hope that he obsseses over you
I hope that he values you...
the way I have...the way I do
And I know that im not;
handsome enough to catch your eye
funny enough to make you laugh
or talented enough to entertain you...
so I tried...
harder than any man ever will for you....
but I failed.... apperently....
the only thing I ever achieved,
was to make myself completely yours.
I gave to you everything, as much as I had
and you only wanted more...
so I tried harder and harder... I gave you all
but once you realized, that you had all of me...
there was no challenge, so you got bored.
and im only sorry for one thing....
im only sorry that I couldnt grow to be what you needed me to be,
to make you stay in love with me


I miss you when my heart beats
I miss you when I breathe
I miss you when I close my eyes
I miss you why'd you leave....




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Re: I miss you when (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 03:41:32 AM AEST
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hmmm..its o.k my friend..the one who expected more from you is unlucky.....
well expressed. venkat


Re: I miss you when (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 04:43:32 AM AEST
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That was beautiful.


Re: I miss you when (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 05:30:37 AM AEST
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Beuatiful, with added sadness,

takecare
Pixie xx


Re: I miss you when (User Rating: 1 )
by MilitaryPrince on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 06:49:52 AM AEST
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I have felt the pain you portrayed through this very well written piece, well done my friend! keep up the good work!


Re: I miss you when (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:52:03 AM AEST
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OMG.....I LOVE IT!!!!! please keep it coming....talk to me sometime....lol..if you want....
Dani


Re: I miss you when (User Rating: 1 )
by wray on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:58:46 AM AEST
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If this is a true story then I'm sorry = Girls can have no heart, they do this all the time. Then again guys probably do too... but girls more often. Too bad you're not gay, methinks that would solve a lot of problems?

Anyway I like the final stanza, it makes you breathless just reading it, then cuts you off with such a sense of loss..


Re: I miss you when (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:28:24 AM AEST
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i love this poem, it makes me want to cry, but you know i cry over everything. i'd want someone to miss me that much, but i would never want to break a heart like that. beautiful poem, good job.




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