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Array ( [sid] => 50324 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gameplay [time] => 2004-06-03 22:50:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Young love.

A love of light between their years
A love of tears
To show no fear she loves his light
He loves her tears
A motion slight to cool her fears.

White dreams
Crackle in a crystal glow
Sweet suffering
The dreams she holds.

His breathless one.

A love of woes to heal her pain
A love of shame
To keep them sane she loves her throes
He loves her shame
But no one knows they play this game. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 13 [informant] => wray [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Gameplay

Contributed by wray on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:50:48 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Young love.

A love of light between their years
A love of tears
To show no fear she loves his light
He loves her tears
A motion slight to cool her fears.

White dreams
Crackle in a crystal glow
Sweet suffering
The dreams she holds.

His breathless one.

A love of woes to heal her pain
A love of shame
To keep them sane she loves her throes
He loves her shame
But no one knows they play this game.

Copyright © wray ... [ 2004-06-03 22:50:48]
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Re: Gameplay (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:22:46 PM AEST
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dark adn sadistic, just the way i like my poetry. YOu've great talent here, I can't wait to read more.

Re: Gameplay (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:49:40 PM AEST
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Wonderful write.
I can't even begin to guess what brought this one on.
Nice write though.

Re: Gameplay (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterat_Zool on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 02:37:57 AM AEST
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What a great form here! It creates a really strong effect in this poem, breaking apart the sentences. The words you use are kind of vague too, which gives the poem a real ethereal sort of dream-like quality. The reverence of pain is always a fun topic, and despite the sad subject matter, it almost gives the poem a comfortable, pleasant feel... Reading this felt a lot like driving over a whole bunch of speed bumps, like in a parking lot, but with a sort of warm pleasantness to it that speed bumps just don't have. Keep it up! I want to see more! Butterat Zool.

Re: Gameplay (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:33:00 AM AEST
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you have a unique style. another great poem!!! A++++

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