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I want to fall away
No reason to stay
It's spinning in place
The emotions around me
I don't know which to believe
Both will end in tragedy
Both massacre
What's inside me
I unleash to get release
And it cost me everything

I try to remember
Why it's like this
I don't know the answer
I just try to forget you
But memories surface
And the voice in my mind
Screams forget them
Or they will kill you in the end
As if they haven't tried already

The thoughts wont disappear
They surface to make me
Remember what will never be
What is in the past
Will always serve as a last reminder
Of why you should never trust
Because they will betray
To give you immeasurable pain

I want to fall away
Standing here is killing me
And I can't stand another day
Of the life I lead [comments] => 2 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 48 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Unleashed Pain

Contributed by essentially9 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:00:28 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Unleashed Pain

I want to fall away
No reason to stay
It's spinning in place
The emotions around me
I don't know which to believe
Both will end in tragedy
Both massacre
What's inside me
I unleash to get release
And it cost me everything

I try to remember
Why it's like this
I don't know the answer
I just try to forget you
But memories surface
And the voice in my mind
Screams forget them
Or they will kill you in the end
As if they haven't tried already

The thoughts wont disappear
They surface to make me
Remember what will never be
What is in the past
Will always serve as a last reminder
Of why you should never trust
Because they will betray
To give you immeasurable pain

I want to fall away
Standing here is killing me
And I can't stand another day
Of the life I lead

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2004-06-03 22:00:28]
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Re: Unleashed Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:13:27 PM AEST
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unleashing and costing you everything might be the means of restarting fresh. not everyone is against you or out to get you. think about the restart............

the voice

Re: Unleashed Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 08:34:00 PM AEST
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Not really sure if I agree with the VOICE..However he is more spirtual then I.
This is a very deep write..One that should have had much more comments on it rather then mine and the christian right..Sorry,,anyhow..What is the life you desire?

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