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Array ( [sid] => 50283 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Demon [time] => 2004-06-03 18:53:34 [hometext] => please take the time to read. This is real, and I did do it. I later became friends with the other girl.... please post your views and comments. [bodytext] => Today I have awoken
with a demon by my side.
At the tender age of 5,
I have alot of evil thoughts.
Today I have learnt to hate,
I have decided I hate you.
My devilish thoughts,
play sinister games in my mind.

I climb the garden shed,
with spiders and tools around me.
I find my goal, my prize,
blue, thick tow rope,
my demon helps me.

As the day goes on,
you come and call for me like always.
Before you reach my door
I jump out, grab you,
tie the rope around your neck,
two knots, that will hold.
You try to scream, but cant.
I run away, your mom comes out,
undoes my tidy work, still cant breathe,
to hospital your taken,
they bring you back around.
but you was meant to die.
why did I fail, I dont understand.

Our parents have fallen out now,
your mom dont trust me any more,
my parents think I should be put away,
padded cell and all.
But im only 5, blue eyes, angelic face,
to cute, no-one would belive.
they dont know my demon.

+ nail-to-the-head + [comments] => 6 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 13 [informant] => nail-to-the-head [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
My Demon

Contributed by nail-to-the-head on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 06:53:34 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Today I have awoken
with a demon by my side.
At the tender age of 5,
I have alot of evil thoughts.
Today I have learnt to hate,
I have decided I hate you.
My devilish thoughts,
play sinister games in my mind.

I climb the garden shed,
with spiders and tools around me.
I find my goal, my prize,
blue, thick tow rope,
my demon helps me.

As the day goes on,
you come and call for me like always.
Before you reach my door
I jump out, grab you,
tie the rope around your neck,
two knots, that will hold.
You try to scream, but cant.
I run away, your mom comes out,
undoes my tidy work, still cant breathe,
to hospital your taken,
they bring you back around.
but you was meant to die.
why did I fail, I dont understand.

Our parents have fallen out now,
your mom dont trust me any more,
my parents think I should be put away,
padded cell and all.
But im only 5, blue eyes, angelic face,
to cute, no-one would belive.
they dont know my demon.

+ nail-to-the-head +




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Re: My Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:00:37 PM AEST
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wow~I like! And you became friends with her later? That's awesome. Way to fight a demon! Everyone has their demons i suppose...this is a really good poem though, i can really feel your emotions through this...great job. If u ever need to talk about ur demons or nething else i'm always here!
~Blackfire


Re: My Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:15:37 PM AEST
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Your poem perfectly demonstrates the fine fine line between good and evil and the importance of nuture.
Vivid!


Re: My Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:16:53 PM AEST
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I meant nurture not nuture but more comments makes more people curious to read your poem so wahey!


Re: My Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by nail-to-the-head on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:20:06 PM AEST
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thanks for comments so far. yeah became friends with her, until a few years back when we were 13, we made new friends at a new school and she changed.

+ nail-to-the-head +


Re: My Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:05:49 PM AEST
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Fascinating poem. Well written mate :)


Re: My Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:30:51 PM AEST
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wow....and some of us wish to vanquish our demons.......what we really should be wishing for is to have the strength of a five year old.......awesome write.....




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