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Array ( [sid] => 50267 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Already A Fallen Angel [time] => 2004-06-03 16:42:53 [hometext] => angelic?devilsh?or just lost between two? [bodytext] => already a fallen angel
i dont belong near hell or heaven
im in between
confused and lost

to good for hell
but to naughty for heaven
where shall i go?

wonder the skies forever
stroke the ocean again
kiss the crystal dew drops
sit apon a cloud and wish
my lil wings could find
a lover not so blind

ive shut myself from the world tonight
and closed my eyes
and imagined you are hear next to me
its the only way i can sleep
the only way i can breathe
other wise im choking and drowding

my hair covers my back
but my hands dont seem to cover my eyes
my clothes
shreaded
im naked
no need to hide anymore
as ive learnt
its impossible
the more you disappear
the more you appear

vansih without a sight
and you come back
without a fight

the arch of my feet
the delicate stroke of my hand
its all there for you
just come and find it

im not hiding
im waiting
for a time
thats more like mine
this past life has flew behind me
im in the winter sun
cold and freezing inside
outside i dont feel

my wings invisible
my haylo
bent
the golden varnish
peeled

my tears froze on my face
im always in distress
im always saddened
by the thought of
another day without a lover
ill simply die
and be lost in between worlds of two

my body and mind are already gone
im just a shadow
and ive just discovered
no one will ever see
and ill never be free?

ungulphed with this sin
my own
cursed by the devil
sinned by the lord
i will never be alive [comments] => 3 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
Already A Fallen Angel

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 04:42:53 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



already a fallen angel
i dont belong near hell or heaven
im in between
confused and lost

to good for hell
but to naughty for heaven
where shall i go?

wonder the skies forever
stroke the ocean again
kiss the crystal dew drops
sit apon a cloud and wish
my lil wings could find
a lover not so blind

ive shut myself from the world tonight
and closed my eyes
and imagined you are hear next to me
its the only way i can sleep
the only way i can breathe
other wise im choking and drowding

my hair covers my back
but my hands dont seem to cover my eyes
my clothes
shreaded
im naked
no need to hide anymore
as ive learnt
its impossible
the more you disappear
the more you appear

vansih without a sight
and you come back
without a fight

the arch of my feet
the delicate stroke of my hand
its all there for you
just come and find it

im not hiding
im waiting
for a time
thats more like mine
this past life has flew behind me
im in the winter sun
cold and freezing inside
outside i dont feel

my wings invisible
my haylo
bent
the golden varnish
peeled

my tears froze on my face
im always in distress
im always saddened
by the thought of
another day without a lover
ill simply die
and be lost in between worlds of two

my body and mind are already gone
im just a shadow
and ive just discovered
no one will ever see
and ill never be free?

ungulphed with this sin
my own
cursed by the devil
sinned by the lord
i will never be alive




Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-06-03 16:42:53]
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Re: Already A Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 04:51:57 PM AEST
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Great poem, I really loved this one

pixie xx


Re: Already A Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 05:31:25 PM AEST
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Tragic and sad, I hope life gets better for you in the future.


Re: Already A Fallen Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 05:53:47 PM AEST
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very interesting.




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