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I love you 2 death and I'm asking if you feel the same way.
I cry my heart out day and night over the loss of you and my heart.
Why don't you see that all I want is to spend time with you?
Understand that I love you with all my heart and soul but if we keep fighting we'll never beable to be together forever like we planned.
The rain pours down the window sill and I cry for you and I cry for me.
Now I ask you this my dear, will you stay with me or will you go?
I want you to stay but I dont want to make you if you don't feel it's right.
My love for you will never die.
But let me ask you will you stay with me and never go away because even though we fight and disagree I love you more and more anyway.
So I beg you my love, please dont leave because I will never give up on us.
But there's a catch.................you have to believe that a man can change.
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why

Contributed by blackflamingskull on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 04:34:04 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Why do u turn and walk away?
I love you 2 death and I'm asking if you feel the same way.
I cry my heart out day and night over the loss of you and my heart.
Why don't you see that all I want is to spend time with you?
Understand that I love you with all my heart and soul but if we keep fighting we'll never beable to be together forever like we planned.
The rain pours down the window sill and I cry for you and I cry for me.
Now I ask you this my dear, will you stay with me or will you go?
I want you to stay but I dont want to make you if you don't feel it's right.
My love for you will never die.
But let me ask you will you stay with me and never go away because even though we fight and disagree I love you more and more anyway.
So I beg you my love, please dont leave because I will never give up on us.
But there's a catch.................you have to believe that a man can change.




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Re: why (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 05:00:01 PM AEST
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A nice write. Unfortunately some women have bitter experience of intransigence, and walk when its not their way - its the highway.
I hope the lady in question believes . . . good luck.
Keep writing.


Re: why (User Rating: 1 )
by fastpitchqt on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:13:46 PM AEST
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I totally agree with this poem, a man can change but only if he wants to. Been there done that, very much in love with someone who made a big change and he finally realized it but yea...may be too late.


Re: why (User Rating: 1 )
by Beautifully-Imperfect on Tuesday, 31st August 2010 @ 02:33:22 PM AEST
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I've seen a man change in a distance but I've never experienced it myself. i wish you luck your poem was awesome




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