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Array ( [sid] => 50262 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Laying Back at the Backseat [time] => 2004-06-03 16:12:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Laying back at the backseat,
Glancing next to the driver seat,
I wonder who would that person be;
I wonder whose heart in the driver's mind,
As he turns on the radio cooling my nerve.

I lay back with glare at the seat,
I glance the glasses to match the driver's eyes.
I wonder have he glance at the person next to him.
I look at the window next to me,
Giving a look as though I don't care.

I sing along the song on radio,
Loud enough to grasp the driver's attention.
I wonder what he's thinking about the music;
I don't have the mood to hear a love song.
The song seems to be singing for the person next to him.

I glare at the volume button of the radio,
Calling louder, louder, you can't drive me insane.
I wonder what my posture must have been;
But I don't mind letting the person acknowledge my presence.
But I don't mind a stare back from her.

(Repeat the whole thing 1X)

(c)Oct 10, 2003
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Laying Back at the Backseat

Contributed by elizasimmons on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 04:12:07 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Laying back at the backseat,
Glancing next to the driver seat,
I wonder who would that person be;
I wonder whose heart in the driver's mind,
As he turns on the radio cooling my nerve.

I lay back with glare at the seat,
I glance the glasses to match the driver's eyes.
I wonder have he glance at the person next to him.
I look at the window next to me,
Giving a look as though I don't care.

I sing along the song on radio,
Loud enough to grasp the driver's attention.
I wonder what he's thinking about the music;
I don't have the mood to hear a love song.
The song seems to be singing for the person next to him.

I glare at the volume button of the radio,
Calling louder, louder, you can't drive me insane.
I wonder what my posture must have been;
But I don't mind letting the person acknowledge my presence.
But I don't mind a stare back from her.

(Repeat the whole thing 1X)

(c)Oct 10, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Copyright © elizasimmons ... [ 2004-06-03 16:12:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Laying Back at the Backseat (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 04:42:31 PM AEST
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Intriguing poem. It had me wondering all the way through it, which isn't a bad thing. At first I thought it was a taxi - or a chaffeured car -, but it seems more intimate than that. A rival love interest? That's perhaps way off the mark, but I enjoyed reading into what you wrote anyways.
Interesting and enjoyable.
Thanks for sharing it.

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