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Array ( [sid] => 50236 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My God of Pain [time] => 2004-06-03 11:25:52 [hometext] => dark sexual poem [bodytext] => Dominate me.
My God of Pain.
***** in me,
and leave your seed.
I give myself up
filled to the brim.
Salt in my tears.
Rips in my skin,
pools of blood.

Sweet and swift.
Your skin is so soft,
sweet and untouched.
Glide with me,
through fields of
white flowers.
Mainline my passion.
Soar as a butterfly
dragonfly girl.

Crumpled in a heap,
clean me up
and take me home.
Stars surround my mind.
Close me up
and
tie me down.
[comments] => 7 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 13 [informant] => MDodgen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

My God of Pain

Contributed by MDodgen on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:25:52 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Dominate me.
My God of Pain.
***** in me,
and leave your seed.
I give myself up
filled to the brim.
Salt in my tears.
Rips in my skin,
pools of blood.

Sweet and swift.
Your skin is so soft,
sweet and untouched.
Glide with me,
through fields of
white flowers.
Mainline my passion.
Soar as a butterfly
dragonfly girl.

Crumpled in a heap,
clean me up
and take me home.
Stars surround my mind.
Close me up
and
tie me down.

Copyright © MDodgen ... [ 2004-06-03 11:25:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My God of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by movax on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:44:55 AM AEST
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Neat poem. Good. Funny

Re: My God of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:56:16 AM AEST
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I really loved this one 5/5

pixie xx

Re: My God of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:08:12 PM AEST
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chances are pretty good their gonna censor this poem like the've done with some of mine. but reguardless an excellent write truley dark and sinister.
~vermillion~

Re: My God of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:57:51 PM AEST
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wow. that's really different to me. i haven't read things like that in a long time. good poem keep up the good work.
~allyson~

Re: My God of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 02:23:27 PM AEST
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I doubt they will censor this one. It isn't overly graphic.
Nice write. Well ok.. The opening is semi-graphic.

Re: My God of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 12:14:13 AM AEST
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A little master piece without obscenity..
I like these sweet beautiful lines ....
"sweet and untouched. Glide with me,
through fields of white flowers"..
may be graphic..but it is lovely and my new favorite...thank you for sharing this excellent
piece. venkat

Re: My God of Pain (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:35:45 PM AEST
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wonderful poem.. i really liked it.. you did a nice job.. AMI JO

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