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YOU promised YOU would never leave me. YOU promised YOU would NEVER hurt me! YOU made me scared, stressed. So scared I couldnt even think or eat. But then that sorry day came when YOU decided it was over! I had NO say in what was goin' to happen. YOU tried to rape my YOUR girlfriend. YOU hurt me, Brittany AND ASHLEY!! Look wut YOU have done!! Are YOU happy now? ...YOU have made US so sick..so sick that WE hate YOU!!! All the anger YOU caused.
Im sorry..that's just how I feel. and now I GET to have a say in WHAT I DO!!
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YOU
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Britty
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Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:37:37 AM in AEST
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YOU!
YOU promised YOU would never leave me. YOU promised YOU would NEVER hurt me! YOU made me scared, stressed. So scared I couldnt even think or eat. But then that sorry day came when YOU decided it was over! I had NO say in what was goin' to happen. YOU tried to rape my YOUR girlfriend. YOU hurt me, Brittany AND ASHLEY!! Look wut YOU have done!! Are YOU happy now? ...YOU have made US so sick..so sick that WE hate YOU!!! All the anger YOU caused.
Im sorry..that's just how I feel. and now I GET to have a say in WHAT I DO!!
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Britty
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Re: YOU
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:17:48 AM AEST
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Goodness, you must have been through a lot. I hope it's better now.
Stitch |
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:14:01 AM AEST
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| I'm sorry to hear of this. I wish thing could of been better for you. I wish He could of kept his promises. But if he was willing to trangress upon you or her like that. sometimes it's best to cut your loss and let that snake slither away. No one should have to feel violated like that. God bless you with better days. peace |
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by pixie on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:59:46 AM AEST
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This sent shivers down my spine, how awful the things you must have been through ((((HUGS))))
You have been brave to share this trully terrifying experience no wonder you are filled with hate.
takecare
Pixie xx |
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Re: YOU
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by shorty_52 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 02:26:18 PM AEST
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powerful very powerful. got me hooked on the first line. keep up the good work.
~allyson~ |
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by adanawa on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 10:13:29 AM AEST
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| let him go honey it would help he oibviosly is no good to you----adanawa |
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Re: YOU
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by Naughtygurl on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 07:36:32 PM AEST
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| your poem you must be a free wright but I like it. I'm sorry girl your troubled its ok i'm here for you I've been through most of that. |
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