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Array ( [sid] => 50214 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Again [time] => 2004-06-03 07:58:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I hate the way you treat me.
I'm tired of your constant rude remarks.
Your always afending me, Why?
What did I do to you?
I need to escape from this hell.
There's no way out.
The only thing I can do
to get rid of this hurt
is to cause more.
Sounds crazy?
Maybe not.
I see these cuts on my wrist and I'm amazed.
I did this
and I'll do it again
just to forget about you.
Crimison regret and betral pours from my cuts.
Why do I keep doing this to myself you ask?
You'll never understand.
This is my only way to escape.
I will not surrender to you.
Just because I do this,
does not mean you won.
It does not mean you have defeated me.
It only means I'm the bigger person
because I will not stoop to your level.
I will come back stronger.
Each time you hurt me, I cut again.
It's my problem not yours,
so don't ACT like you finally care.
Just leave me alone in my sweet surrender as I continue to rid myself of you.
The scars I leave behind is a constant reminder of where I've been,
and where I'll be again. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Princesaazul16 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Again

Contributed by Princesaazul16 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 07:58:32 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I hate the way you treat me.
I'm tired of your constant rude remarks.
Your always afending me, Why?
What did I do to you?
I need to escape from this hell.
There's no way out.
The only thing I can do
to get rid of this hurt
is to cause more.
Sounds crazy?
Maybe not.
I see these cuts on my wrist and I'm amazed.
I did this
and I'll do it again
just to forget about you.
Crimison regret and betral pours from my cuts.
Why do I keep doing this to myself you ask?
You'll never understand.
This is my only way to escape.
I will not surrender to you.
Just because I do this,
does not mean you won.
It does not mean you have defeated me.
It only means I'm the bigger person
because I will not stoop to your level.
I will come back stronger.
Each time you hurt me, I cut again.
It's my problem not yours,
so don't ACT like you finally care.
Just leave me alone in my sweet surrender as I continue to rid myself of you.
The scars I leave behind is a constant reminder of where I've been,
and where I'll be again.

Copyright © Princesaazul16 ... [ 2004-06-03 07:58:32]
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Re: Again (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 09:57:38 AM AEST
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this was amazing and quite disturbing. I understand that you do not want to stoop down to the level of wrongdoers, however I think that continuing to cut your wrists every time you feel pain is not going to bring you happiness in the end. (I should not be one to talk for I don't know what it feels like.) I just hope that things go well for you and you finally see the light at the end of the tunnel because it does exist. (I am sure of this.) Just take care of yourself and continue writing and let it out that way, put down the knife and pick up the pen! You don't want to have no hand to write with! Take care.

brandon

Re: Again (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:06:26 AM AEST
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I used to cut alot, but I found the strength inside me to stop cutting and deal with my pain in better ways... you will be able to this also when you feel strong enough, I hope that there is alittle light at the end of your tunnel,
takecare
Pixie xx

Very powerful and well expressed by the way.

Re: Again (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 02:36:46 PM AEST
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i hate that feeling. i'm sorry that u felt that way. it'll get better u'll see.
~allyson~

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