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Array ( [sid] => 5013 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Guardian [time] => 2002-10-13 10:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When I talk you need to listen
What I say you need to hear
Pointless not to acknowledge me
it's pointless not to fear
I'm here to give you some advice
of the crumbling life around
I'm here to give you freedom
from the pain of being bound
Your word to me means nothing
Your feedback to me means less
I just need you to coorperate
and you won't feel so opressed
because Death is waiting for you
at your doorstep he will agree
to take your life away from you
unless you listen to me
Face this darkness with your light
Feel it from within
Then shine yourself through the night
and let the suffering end
Oh, my valiant one you've done so well
your life in luxury yes
And from now on I shall be gone
for I have done my best.
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Guardian

Contributed by InexactExactness on Sunday, 13th October 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

When I talk you need to listen
What I say you need to hear
Pointless not to acknowledge me
it's pointless not to fear
I'm here to give you some advice
of the crumbling life around
I'm here to give you freedom
from the pain of being bound
Your word to me means nothing
Your feedback to me means less
I just need you to coorperate
and you won't feel so opressed
because Death is waiting for you
at your doorstep he will agree
to take your life away from you
unless you listen to me
Face this darkness with your light
Feel it from within
Then shine yourself through the night
and let the suffering end
Oh, my valiant one you've done so well
your life in luxury yes
And from now on I shall be gone
for I have done my best.

Copyright © InexactExactness ... [ 2002-10-13 10:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Guardian (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarah22 on Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 05:12:26 PM AEST
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amazing poem.

Re: Guardian (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 11:25:13 PM AEST
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And a guardian angel you could very well be my friend as much wisdom as you have in certain area's of life that many do not see...nor do they feel....im left speechless on this as not to let my tongue get away with me...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

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