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[aid] => mick
[title] => Ravenous
[time] => 2004-06-02 15:06:29
[hometext] => This one was a 'Joy' to write. It was fun to mess around with the english language structure and wording. Its about a neurotically happy family, dont worry, evil unfolds quickly
[bodytext] => The two children sit at the table The mothers eyes always observing Father sits, recites a work fable All is anaesthetized by his droning A subtle incomplete smile from lee His sister nods, its time for supper… “Oh what a surprise! Oh what a treat!” Shrieks the ecstatic mother loudly Quietly the kids look down to their feet “Look what they made!” she cried so proudly “A FEAST!” cried Dad, hands in the air The children anticipate despair… Plates are protruded from the kitchen Smiles aplenty, a perfect dinner Dad stared at the plate, “is it chicken?” They stare back, neither a sinner Those innocent faces filled with love No one could ever suspect; no one… Suddenly father let out a yell He chipped his tooth on an old gold ring “What is this, have you something to tell?” “We wanted to make your favourite thing” Shocked dad looked at his plate, a finger An eye, a toe, the sauce was too red… Mother stopped eating, she too stares down “What on earth did you two do” he cried “What’s wrong dad”, in unison “Don’t you like grandma?” [comments] => 7 [counter] => 524 [topic] => 13 [informant] => alecfernadez [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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