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Dear Sadness
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:44:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I have found another friend, his name is happiness,
He gives me more and you give me less,
He loves, comforts and releases me,
Where as you kept hold and wouldn’t let me go free.
He talks to me and holds me tight,
Doesn’t make me depressed and taunts me at night,
His words wrap around me like a cover,
He is caring and shows compassion like a lover.
I spent too long with you by my side,
I wanted you to go, I felt I had to hide,
You stopped me from smiling and feeling good,
Not encourage me and help me like a real friend would.
This friend is a friend I can trust,
As I know his kindness wont turn into dust,
He has already shown me so much in a short time lapse,
His hand is extended and I know I’m in his grasp.
True friends are so very hard to find,
Now he and I are locked in a bind,
I am now free from all my feelings of madness,
Hello present love and goodbye to my ex……. Sadness.
Copyright ©
pixie
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Re: Dear Sadness
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:58:33 AM AEST
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| GREAT POEM ! in fact I think you said good bye to sadness and he found me..... but now reading your poem. I can say hello to happiness again and kick sadness out the door...........sandy |
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Re: Dear Sadness
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by Brians_Sweety on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 10:43:00 AM AEST
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Great Poem!!! This was really awesome! I just loved the way you put it. You have great wording and I admire it greatly. I am very pleased you decided to share and I hope you share much more in the future!!
Stephanie |
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Re: Dear Sadness
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:01:31 AM AEST
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| awesome poem...excellent one to read...a poem that i needed...thanks for sharing this one...God bless...EM =P |
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Re: Dear Sadness
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:05:55 PM AEST
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Wow, This is one of the best poems I've read in along time. The way you personified happiness and sadness was very good....
Loved this immensely..
Jenni |
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Re: Dear Sadness
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by SweetRhythm on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 10:38:49 AM AEST
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First of all may I just say "Truly Amazing"! I loved it, it was great, so uplifting & positive! Good stuff. Very well thought up & writen.
Your fellow poet
Corinna |
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