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~ CLOUDS ~
Contributed by
AnGeL_M
on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 06:38:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Ever Above, All
Around
Blocking The
Evil
Advising The
Good
At Times They're
Missing
Things Become
Weak
They Always Return
Though
Offering
Truth
To Those Who Will
Listen
Nothing Is Free
Though
And Truth Never
Was
But With It Comes
Gifts
Gifts I Never
Wanted
But Can Never
Refuse
The Knowlege Is
Cursed
Shall Torment Me
Always
Yet I Must Use
Them
Or Life Shall
Become
EMPTY
Copyright ©
AnGeL_M
... [
2004-06-02 06:38:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ~ CLOUDS ~
(User Rating: 1 ) by apollo on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 06:46:45 AM AEST (User
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life sure will become empty if you dont get what you dont need. hopefully the knowledge isnt too cursed cause although it may seem that way, it is only temporary. i really had an enjoyable time reading this because there is so much that goes into it. it is sad that truth isnt free, its almost like you have to give something up just to hear the truth. sad but true. beautiful write though. |
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Re: ~ CLOUDS ~
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rylo on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 06:40:37 PM AEST (User
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This was certainly different, but it was really good. You no life without truth truly is a life full of emptiness. Great write babe, love you always Ronald. |
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Re: ~ CLOUDS ~
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:42:33 AM AEST (User
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Another great write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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