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[title] => HIS HEART EMBRACES YOURS
[time] => 2004-06-02 01:47:49
[hometext] => Rita, the poetess here at YPDC has just lost the man she loves. He died the 29th of May. Please make all your comments to her to build her up this day.
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"HIS HEART EMBRACES YOURS"
Your heart the core, a beautiful red rose,
his heart embraces yours.
Each layer closely wound to bring comforting memoirs.
A rose is a special gift from God, in whom you laud.
He is Your Core now, lean heavily on His Shoulders Broad!
Sitting as closely as allowed to your so dearly loved.
A vigil of hope, waiting helplessly, your sweet beloved.
Trying to breath your breathe of life into his soul.
Clinging to every minute you have left to console.
There's always hope, perhaps today he will awaken
Praying each moment, from death, 'twil be granted a pardon.
Fighting not to imagine what it would be like if he should leave.
Testing your faith, "Please Dear God let me cleave!"
Your chair by his bedside remains warm....
Afraid to venture, will that be the moment of alarm?
You remain a faithful sentry guarding over his whole being.
Your heart filled with love, "Please don't die,' it's begging!
You begin to wonder?
Does he know I'm here, can he understand, hear?
Can he feel my presence, even though he can't speak?
Does he feel my fingers entwined in his, know I'm near?
Did I say it enough times, our deep love critiqued?
Layers of his heart are now closely wrapped around mine.
Each layer a memory of a wonderful, kind, caring man.
He was so intelligent, always giving of himself so fine.
God's gift, my beautiful rose, petals of love forever span.
Created especially
for my dear friend Rita
In memory of your Loving Rose.
May 29, 2004
ConSue
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"God shall wipe all tears from their eyes;
and there shall be no more death, nor crying,
neither shall there be any more pain;
for the former things have passed away"
Rev. 21:4
"Comforting Hugs"
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HIS HEART EMBRACES YOURS
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lovingcritters
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Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 01:47:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
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"HIS HEART EMBRACES YOURS"
Your heart the core, a beautiful red rose,
his heart embraces yours.
Each layer closely wound to bring comforting memoirs.
A rose is a special gift from God, in whom you laud.
He is Your Core now, lean heavily on His Shoulders Broad!
Sitting as closely as allowed to your so dearly loved.
A vigil of hope, waiting helplessly, your sweet beloved.
Trying to breath your breathe of life into his soul.
Clinging to every minute you have left to console.
There's always hope, perhaps today he will awaken
Praying each moment, from death, 'twil be granted a pardon.
Fighting not to imagine what it would be like if he should leave.
Testing your faith, "Please Dear God let me cleave!"
Your chair by his bedside remains warm....
Afraid to venture, will that be the moment of alarm?
You remain a faithful sentry guarding over his whole being.
Your heart filled with love, "Please don't die,' it's begging!
You begin to wonder?
Does he know I'm here, can he understand, hear?
Can he feel my presence, even though he can't speak?
Does he feel my fingers entwined in his, know I'm near?
Did I say it enough times, our deep love critiqued?
Layers of his heart are now closely wrapped around mine.
Each layer a memory of a wonderful, kind, caring man.
He was so intelligent, always giving of himself so fine.
God's gift, my beautiful rose, petals of love forever span.
Created especially
for my dear friend Rita
In memory of your Loving Rose.
May 29, 2004
ConSue
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"God shall wipe all tears from their eyes;
and there shall be no more death, nor crying,
neither shall there be any more pain;
for the former things have passed away"
Rev. 21:4
"Comforting Hugs"
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:01:29 AM AEST
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| Its a very sad news..very, very sorry for the loss happened to our beloved friend Rita...my eyes are moistured..may God give her needed strength and peace to his soul. venkat |
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:11:26 AM AEST
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| may god bless you with strength and guidance in your time of need. we are here for you and you are in our prayers. |
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:52:17 AM AEST
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Mom, I'm sure this awesome write will bring her comfort many times over.
I'm so sorry to hear about this.
luv, huggs,
your brat,
emy |
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 03:28:12 AM AEST
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When a loved one passes on to that great new adventure we that are left behind can only lament. Our thought and prayers I am sure are with Rita at this time of her sad bereavement.
bernard. |
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 04:10:53 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem but of sorrow, My heart goes out. May angels now come to comfort. may peace be fallen with arms that hold you tight. we love you. sandy |
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 04:13:38 AM AEST
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He is as close as your heart for where there is love...they are there...you are in my prayers
Shari |
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by Lone_er on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:10:39 AM AEST
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| I am so very sorry Rita. May God give you comfort in the knowledge it's only a temporary seperation...Russ |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:33:16 AM AEST
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Rita,
Knowing the end was near didn't make it any easier. But may his last words surround and embrace you, for he will always be loving you., the love never ends.
All of us here will support you in any way we can. You are a great writer and a loving soul. I wish you strength. |
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:35:57 AM AEST
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{{{{{ Rita }}}}} May God Strengthen & Comfort You Each & Everyday Let Him Embrace You With His Tender Love, Mercy & Grace !!! I'm So Sorry For Your Loss Rita ... There's Not Much We Can Say Or Do But Pray For You & Be Here To Give You Comfort & Love As Well !!! Rita You Are A Dear Close Friend Of Mine Even Though I've Not Been On Ypdc That Long But I Do Want You To Know I Care & Love You As A Big Sister !!!
LoVe,Hugs & God Bless My Prayers Are With You Always Rita !!!!!
Connie This Is Beautiful But Very Sad !!!
You Have Written This Well For Our Sweet Rita I'm Sure She'll Appreciate This Alot....
My Heart Goes Out To Her !!!!!
Love,Hugs & God Bless My Prayers Are With You As Well Connie !!!!
LoVe - AnGeL
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:59:13 AM AEST
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Connie, this is a very sweet and caring thing to do. I'm sure Rita will be somewhat comforted by this and the fact that her many friends here at YPDC will be thinking of her in her time of need.
Stay strong, Rita....
Hugs
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 06:50:29 AM AEST
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Connie this is beautiful and you are a wonderful person for writing such a poem for Rita.
Rita, words can't express my sadness for you. When a loved one is seriously ill or passes we find out just who our friends really are. My heart goes out to you my dear friend. May God bless you and hold you in this time of sorrow. I am here if you need me.
Larry |
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by thumper on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 07:55:07 AM AEST
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Rita, love, hugs, and prayers for you. As long as you hold your love in your heart and mind, he's not gone. My heart goes out to you. You are a beautiful person, it shows in your poetry. May you find peace of mind. Deepest Sympathy.
Thumps
This poem is so touching consue, I'm at a loss for words. It has me in tears! Such a beautiful tribute for Rita and her loss.
Thumps ; 0 )
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:29:14 AM AEST
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Yes, may God comfort as only He can. He promises to always be with us. Imagine what our pain might be if he weren't. Praying for you Rita.
Stitch |
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by Arwen on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 09:27:37 AM AEST
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I'm truly sorry for your loss Rita. You will pull through this!!! You have lots of loving friends here on YPDC who are ready and willing to help you whenever you need them. Love lasts forever, and its link continues, strong and patient, even with seperation. You will be with him again someday.
ps: The poem is beautiful critters :) |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:23:31 AM AEST
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Dearest Rita,
Your screen is full of loving wishes right now,yet I don't know if anything can take away the pain you are feeling. Sometimes we feel anger, other times grief and sadness,sometimes we want to run away and blame God for everything. Please know that amid all the turmoil, He is with you. Your loved one is with Him and a peace is enshrouding all the love he could feel for you.
Remember...love never ends...it is an eternal flux of flowing joy that transcends all physical things. May you be comforted by all the love everyone is sending your way.You are in my thoughts and prayers. God bless you,Rita!
(((((((((((((Rita)))))))))))))
Angel always.....joni |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:46:07 AM AEST
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To all of you, my friends here at YPDC, you cannot even begin to imagine how much this means to me. I have met the kindest, dearest people here on this site. Some of you suffered through with me and I will forever be grateful for that. You held me together with the knowledge that you were there if I needed you. Your words helped me get through each long day and night. You were my strength when I was exhausted. He would have cherished each and everyone of you, I know that I certainly do. All I ask is that you each live your lives to the fullest and enjoy the time you have here on this big beautiful planet.
My love to each and everyone of you,
Rita |
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 11:48:26 AM AEST
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Bless, Rita . . . shall be thinking of and praying for you and yours. May you heal . . . bless.
Beautiful tribute, Connie :).
--Nora |
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:06:42 PM AEST
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My heart goes out to you, Rita, on this saddened occascion... I have never been where you are, but my heart travels with you to give you support....
And Connie, bless you, this is a wonderful poem and I hope that Rita can take something from it just as the rest of us have. It's so like you to do something like this and so Rita has the best friend a person could ask for helping her through this.
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:36:18 PM AEST
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What a beautiful tribute for your friend
A truly beautiful poem
I am so sorry for your loss Rita.
I pray the angels will be by your side and god will take you in his arms and care for you
In my thoughts
Lots of love Angelxxxxx |
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:36:44 PM AEST
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| Thanks for writing this for her. |
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by Overstated on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:40:50 PM AEST
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| my heart goes out to you Rita |
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 04:04:33 PM AEST
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Rita, my heart goes out to you. I will not forget you in my prayers. May God's deepest love and peace find you in this darkness, and heal your heart.
Blessings
Andrew |
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 10:14:55 PM AEST
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Rita...
Sorry to hear of ur loss... the only thing I can offer r my heartfelt prayers for u... u will defintely be in them...
Connie...
Great job... very beautiful poem and beautifully written... thanks for sharing.
~Donna~ |
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by mountainhigh on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 10:54:28 PM AEST
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To one who means so very much, tears and prayers and thoughts, and great hope that she is comforted, and that sweet whispers she hears every minute of every day.
I am so very sorry.
This poem is such a beautiful, loving gift, from another sweet angel of ypdc.
Chris |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:15:50 AM AEST
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A beautiful dedication, filled with love and strength, my prayers are with you Rita.
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:15:21 AM AEST
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You are in my prayers rita,i wish much love and peace for you in this sad time..
Tony |
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:41:17 AM AEST
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Dearest Rita,
How very sorry to hear from your terrible loss. I know that words in no way can get near to comforting the pain you must go through, but since they are all I can give you...
I wish you all the strength and I hope the sun one day will shine in your heart again to enlight your memories and to guide you on the path of life that lies ahead of you.
Big hug,
Hur |
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by srugglingyoungster on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 05:05:39 PM AEST
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Rita,
awww rita, im so sorry for you. I know how it is to loose someone so close to you. I send you my condolenses and wish you happiness in your future.
lots of love and hugs,
SY (Brittany) |
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 08:49:35 PM AEST
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| OMG Rita I'm so sorry I've been away for awahile & I just heard!My sympathys to you & his fam.Christina |
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:44:48 PM AEST
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ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! BRINGS TEARS TO MY EYES!! THE ROSE'S GO SO WELL WITH THIS POEM TOO,BY THE WAY!!! RITA IS ALL SO LUCKY & BLESSED TO HAVE SUCH A DEAR FRIEND LIKE YOU CONNIE!!!!
TO HELP HER THROUGH HER TIME OF NEED!!!!! PLEASE TAKE CARE RITA,FOR WE WILL ALL SAY A PRAYER FOR YOU!!!!!!
LOL~2 BOTH RITA & CONNIE!!!!!!!
LOVE~DAN!!!!!!!! |
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by Aika on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 02:55:19 PM AEST
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| very very sad, but so lovely! sorry for Rita´s lost, honest sorry, it hurts... with love, aika:-) |
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