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I look back
swept of my feet
knocked on my back
I cant seem to breath
so hard to think
this far from the edge
so close to the brink
thoughts resurface
so do the tears
the pain runs deep
for so many years
im done being beaten
im done being played
im done with the lies
and those words they say
im done with the leers
im done with the hate
im done with the giving
and having nothing to take
im done with the jokes
im done thier smiles
saying they like me
being fake all the while
im done with running
im done with hiding
im done with the struggle
im no longer fighting
im done with my life
im done with the breathing
im done with the pain
and the way that its seething
Im done holding back
im done being dumb
im done being told
to put back the gun
im done with the conflict
so deep within
im tired of going
i'll never win
im done with it all
im done here you see
these are the last words
youll ever get from me
so tired of being small
ill never be any bigger
so i'll just end it all
by hugging on this trigger

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Done with you all.....

Contributed by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 09:02:39 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

time flows foward
I look back
swept of my feet
knocked on my back
I cant seem to breath
so hard to think
this far from the edge
so close to the brink
thoughts resurface
so do the tears
the pain runs deep
for so many years
im done being beaten
im done being played
im done with the lies
and those words they say
im done with the leers
im done with the hate
im done with the giving
and having nothing to take
im done with the jokes
im done thier smiles
saying they like me
being fake all the while
im done with running
im done with hiding
im done with the struggle
im no longer fighting
im done with my life
im done with the breathing
im done with the pain
and the way that its seething
Im done holding back
im done being dumb
im done being told
to put back the gun
im done with the conflict
so deep within
im tired of going
i'll never win
im done with it all
im done here you see
these are the last words
youll ever get from me
so tired of being small
ill never be any bigger
so i'll just end it all
by hugging on this trigger

Copyright © holderofthestone ... [ 2004-06-01 21:02:39]
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Re: Done with you all..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 09:23:28 PM AEST
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holder.... HOLDER!... you went dark here, very dark. The poem is excellent... but the words---- difficult to read. It is, I hope, an effort to exercise the emotion and nothing more. Tomorrow, holder, will bring something better if you let it come. It always does... even when it seems impossible that it would.

*deep breath*

Re: Done with you all..... (User Rating: 1 )
by InnerBeautyQueen on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 09:47:20 PM AEST
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i like your poem sooooo much! ahh... you're good!!
you know what part I like...
//im done being beaten
im done being played
im done with the lies
and those words they say//

yeah... i know that feeling...

Re: Done with you all..... (User Rating: 1 )
by matingcrow on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 11:04:01 PM AEST
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I was just about to escape. Powerful. Gripping end. M

Re: Done with you all..... (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 02:37:41 AM AEST
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powerful, gripping and wonderful.Awww.
I have also written one suicidal poem.."love me death " or so..lol. some times these thoughts and feelings are very real ..venkat

Re: Done with you all..... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 04:50:18 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
I pray this is jus writing.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: Done with you all..... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 04:51:53 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
I pray this is jus writing.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: Done with you all..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:22:40 PM AEST
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wow, very very sad powerful...i for one wouldnt kill my self with a gun tho...I hate guns lol but yeah I think im done with it all also...done with trying to kill myself evrything all of it im done Im going to live life....and how it goes it goes...you should to...i loved this write very emotional and sad...
much love,
Dani

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