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Array ( [sid] => 50018 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shut Down [time] => 2004-06-01 17:54:04 [hometext] => this what ive been trying to do for the past while, not die, just pause my life, and let it all pass by [bodytext] => mute
i cannot speak
no words to form

for me to speak
its a useless hope of mine
i form words that no one can hear

you have blocked my voice out of you minds
out of your heads so you cant hear me cry
im just so useless

i cant be heard
if i try ill just be told down
put down again and again

maybe if i stopped being
just gave up all together
you wouldnt see me as i go

you would hear me cry my silent life into your ears
you cant hear me
dead to you

im dead to you
to all of you
i dont exist

im just no one
a nobody
a freak

so no one would mind if i shut myself up
just closed off all my motions
shut down and shut off my system of faliure

so this is what ill do
shut up
shut down

mute and dead
dead to you
dead to the world

sut off this system of mine that gose down throught a tunnel
this spirling system of faliure and misery
just shut it off

fick the switch and watch my moniter of a life fade
into and endless blackness
deeper ever deeper

and no one will notice
and no one will care
just shut down

no words to form
i cannot speak
mute
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 36 [informant] => TwEeK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Shut Down

Contributed by TwEeK on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 05:54:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



mute
i cannot speak
no words to form

for me to speak
its a useless hope of mine
i form words that no one can hear

you have blocked my voice out of you minds
out of your heads so you cant hear me cry
im just so useless

i cant be heard
if i try ill just be told down
put down again and again

maybe if i stopped being
just gave up all together
you wouldnt see me as i go

you would hear me cry my silent life into your ears
you cant hear me
dead to you

im dead to you
to all of you
i dont exist

im just no one
a nobody
a freak

so no one would mind if i shut myself up
just closed off all my motions
shut down and shut off my system of faliure

so this is what ill do
shut up
shut down

mute and dead
dead to you
dead to the world

sut off this system of mine that gose down throught a tunnel
this spirling system of faliure and misery
just shut it off

fick the switch and watch my moniter of a life fade
into and endless blackness
deeper ever deeper

and no one will notice
and no one will care
just shut down

no words to form
i cannot speak
mute




Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-06-01 17:54:04]
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Re: Shut Down (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:23:44 PM AEST
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good poem... this touched me deep since I have also wanted to pause my life and let all the crap flow over me. I hope you find whatever it is that will give you fulfilment in your life.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Shut Down (User Rating: 1 )
by DirtyFool on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:11:04 PM AEST
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I can relate to this poem. it is very deep and good. your poems are always good. keep it up.

liz


Re: Shut Down (User Rating: 1 )
by BloodyTears5 on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:35:00 PM AEST
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very well done. I know how you feel. I just want to just pause time so i dont have to hurt anymore.





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