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Needed Things to Say

I always thought I’d make love to you
One more time it’s true
Feel the sudden inrush of my breath
Astonished at the perfection that is you

I truly thought we had tomorrow
To revel in our love so sweet
To explore all the joys
That makes a love complete

Alas time has passed us by
You are mine no more
My heart mourns the loss
Of the woman I adore

But come tomorrow morning
When hearts have had a chance to cry
When honesty and compassion
Have revealed their reasons why

I think we just might find
Love has found another way
For two hearts so in love
To express the things they need to say

Russ
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Needed Things to Say

Contributed by Lone_er on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 05:05:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

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Needed Things to Say

I always thought I’d make love to you
One more time it’s true
Feel the sudden inrush of my breath
Astonished at the perfection that is you

I truly thought we had tomorrow
To revel in our love so sweet
To explore all the joys
That makes a love complete

Alas time has passed us by
You are mine no more
My heart mourns the loss
Of the woman I adore

But come tomorrow morning
When hearts have had a chance to cry
When honesty and compassion
Have revealed their reasons why

I think we just might find
Love has found another way
For two hearts so in love
To express the things they need to say

Russ

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Re: Needed Things to Say (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:16:48 PM AEST
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Oh Russ this is so revealing, honestly wise, and so sad. I do hope this works out for you both. Amazing what a little hope can do, even for those who have lost like you.
Communication seems to be the ruination for so many couples. Why do we hold back from saying the things we know need to be said?
This was a fine poem.....touched my heart, and I'm glad you ended it with hope. There is always a way, if only you don't give up hope.
Poetic hugs and prayers for you both
consue

Re: Needed Things to Say (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:55:09 PM AEST
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These things happen, Russ... always remember..Love will find a way!!

"I think we just might find
Love has found another way
For two hearts so in love
To express the things they need to say"

Hugs
Jen

Re: Needed Things to Say (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 05:14:28 AM AEST
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Sadly touches..absolutely heart captivating write..venkat

Re: Needed Things to Say (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 01:26:32 PM AEST
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A sad expression of truth. So well spoken, and no truer words forthcoming. I loved the emotion in this. Thanks..... :-)
Angel always...godspeed my friend...joni

Re: Needed Things to Say (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 03:59:23 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
luv, huggs,
emy

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