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Array ( [sid] => 49957 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Through a Poet's Eyes [time] => 2004-06-01 10:22:19 [hometext] => My personal opinion [bodytext] => Poet's resume life with whispers that soar,
whirling in space the images you implore
Spreading our dreams from delicate power,
granting visual gestures you can devour
Desires on paper may hold some aggression,
threading thoughts in facinating expression
Donating beauty to a strangers eyes,
allowing sun to fall on our cries
Fantasy and facts with words we combine,
fluctuate glitter on the moon that will shine
Perception of thoughts we fully submerse,
casting emotions are a poet's thirst [comments] => 3 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 25 [informant] => shanarah [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Through a Poet's Eyes

Contributed by shanarah on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 10:22:19 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Poet's resume life with whispers that soar,
whirling in space the images you implore
Spreading our dreams from delicate power,
granting visual gestures you can devour
Desires on paper may hold some aggression,
threading thoughts in facinating expression
Donating beauty to a strangers eyes,
allowing sun to fall on our cries
Fantasy and facts with words we combine,
fluctuate glitter on the moon that will shine
Perception of thoughts we fully submerse,
casting emotions are a poet's thirst

Copyright © shanarah ... [ 2004-06-01 10:22:19]
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Re: Through a Poet's Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 10:29:27 AM AEST
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very descriptive.
thanks for sharing

Re: Through a Poet's Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:28:42 PM AEST
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Consider yourself a poet !!
You managed to pack a lovely flow of words into a short piece
Wonderful

steve

Re: Through a Poet's Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 05:20:42 AM AEST
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Given how effortless (yet complex) your rhymes are in this piece, I think you'd do well to try out rhyming poetry a little more often. Each line flows very well, and nothing seems forced. The descriptions are no less than breathtaking, and the theme (as well as the title) is superb. To put it poetically, this flickers with the spirit of poetry, alight with the essence of beauty.

Sawwed in two by an obscenely large pendulum,
-V.S.

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