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Squeezing my eyes tight to fight back the tears
Reminiscing through the stages of my short life
I need to be rescued from all my lies and fears

I can’t take all the deception and strain anymore
Its all proving too much to bear, let alone affray
I must find a way out, a means to an overdue end
To break these false shackles, and lead me astray

All that I believed in; my convictions, dust to dust
Dissolute. Crumbling like weary façades of age old
I’m tired. Let my somnolent body rest evermore
Let the winds of change take me away from the cold
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Dissolution

Contributed by emphaticplacebo on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:42:12 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I don’t know what real these days anymore
Squeezing my eyes tight to fight back the tears
Reminiscing through the stages of my short life
I need to be rescued from all my lies and fears

I can’t take all the deception and strain anymore
Its all proving too much to bear, let alone affray
I must find a way out, a means to an overdue end
To break these false shackles, and lead me astray

All that I believed in; my convictions, dust to dust
Dissolute. Crumbling like weary façades of age old
I’m tired. Let my somnolent body rest evermore
Let the winds of change take me away from the cold

Copyright Â© emphaticplacebo ... [ 2004-06-01 08:42:12]
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Re: Dissolution (User Rating: 1 )
by taintedmind on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:44:26 AM AEST
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greatly expressed loved it

Re: Dissolution (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:49:23 AM AEST
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very deep, your rhymes fit in really well with the flow of it... great write

Re: Dissolution (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 03:58:17 PM AEST
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Beautiful... there was a haunting qaulity in
this write that really got to me. I loved the last
line especially it was so strong and was a
perfect ending to the poem. You made this
seem very real and yeah I am now definitely a
fan.

Bobo (Joel)

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