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easy to cut
your words are like a knife
stabbing my soul
your words are lies
yours lies are your life
you have made me cry
for the last ***** time
im dead to you like you are dead to me
you aim to please someone else
i don't understand you
dad you ought to die i hate you
dad you ought to leave she hates you as much as i do
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my blessed daddy

Contributed by taintedmind on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:31:36 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Your words are like warm butter
easy to cut
your words are like a knife
stabbing my soul
your words are lies
yours lies are your life
you have made me cry
for the last ***** time
im dead to you like you are dead to me
you aim to please someone else
i don't understand you
dad you ought to die i hate you
dad you ought to leave she hates you as much as i do

Copyright © taintedmind ... [ 2004-06-01 08:31:36]
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Re: my blessed daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:39:27 AM AEST
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your anger is very powerful and expressed well... hope things get better

Re: my blessed daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 08:46:17 AM AEST
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You have expressed your anger in a very tasteful and powerful way,

takecare

Pixie xx

Re: my blessed daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by StrangeLittleGirl on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 09:01:22 AM AEST
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Very angry but well written poem :)

Re: my blessed daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by krisseee on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 09:31:31 AM AEST
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this poem could have been written by my girlfriend, is exactly the same.
although, rather than write about him, i'm just going to have to kill him.
And i'm not joking.
anyway, good write.

Re: my blessed daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 09:43:41 AM AEST
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ouch, thats powerful. good job.

Re: my blessed daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by shanarah on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 11:12:39 AM AEST
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WOW!! Deep message, I like this style.

Re: my blessed daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:44:26 AM AEST
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Your anger was expressed really well. I feel the same exact way about my dad sometimes.. Great poem..

christina

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