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Array ( [sid] => 49929 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mr Beautiful, Mr Grotesque [time] => 2004-06-01 06:38:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Mr Beautiful, Mr Grotesque,
You promised me the world
And so this sickening girl is what you adore
Something to abuse, but something to hold on for
Mr Handsome, Mr Rich
I want you like a shallow fool
You’ll want me to too if I’m just like you
Disgustingly rich, and attractive too
Mr Truthful, Mr Lies
So sick of your weak disguise
Say my name out loud if you do dare
Just don’t pretend that you really care
Deception is my middle name
Deception is my favourite game
And when you lie, I’ll love you more
I’ll beg for you when you treat me like a chore
Admit it, am I in the way?
Am I destroying your every plan?
Admit it, do you want me to go?
Mr Big Shot, Mr Successful, Mr “I’m the ***** Man!”
Daddy’s little princess, hand me a gun
One day I will be someone
Daddy’s little princess, I’m sure she has a name
Miss Manipulation, Miss Fraud, Miss “I’m leaving you again”
Daddy’s little princess became a little whore
Mr Beautiful, you did this because you didn’t want me anymore. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 6 [informant] => carmen_queasy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Mr Beautiful, Mr Grotesque

Contributed by carmen_queasy on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:38:35 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Mr Beautiful, Mr Grotesque,
You promised me the world
And so this sickening girl is what you adore
Something to abuse, but something to hold on for
Mr Handsome, Mr Rich
I want you like a shallow fool
You’ll want me to too if I’m just like you
Disgustingly rich, and attractive too
Mr Truthful, Mr Lies
So sick of your weak disguise
Say my name out loud if you do dare
Just don’t pretend that you really care
Deception is my middle name
Deception is my favourite game
And when you lie, I’ll love you more
I’ll beg for you when you treat me like a chore
Admit it, am I in the way?
Am I destroying your every plan?
Admit it, do you want me to go?
Mr Big Shot, Mr Successful, Mr “I’m the ***** Man!”
Daddy’s little princess, hand me a gun
One day I will be someone
Daddy’s little princess, I’m sure she has a name
Miss Manipulation, Miss Fraud, Miss “I’m leaving you again”
Daddy’s little princess became a little whore
Mr Beautiful, you did this because you didn’t want me anymore.




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Re: Mr Beautiful, Mr Grotesque (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:04:14 AM AEST
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Powerful piece, this one. I like the loathing expressions here, you go!


Re: Mr Beautiful, Mr Grotesque (User Rating: 1 )
by StrangeLittleGirl on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:26:33 AM AEST
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Completely agree with Avarice_Riot, they said it all for me :)


Re: Mr Beautiful, Mr Grotesque (User Rating: 1 )
by TeenageEmoGirl on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 03:50:34 PM AEST
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wow, this is so powerful but seriously, i completely feel it.... you are an excellent writer with a lot of talent.




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