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Array ( [sid] => 4992 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => We can make it [time] => 2002-10-12 15:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It’s the passion in your expression
It’s the kindness in your voice
It’s the way you look at me
It’s not even my choice
You control the way I feel, like it or not
Your effect on me has been so deep
In reality you know you have my heart
Even when I pretend that my feelings for you have disappeared
I just can’t seem to be strong
Our love was meant to be
I speak without a doubt
Never regretting, not even a single day with you
Some days I think it’s over
Some days I believe we’re not going to make it
But I just can’t seem to convince myself
That our love can not hold out
Your love is my protection
Without you I’m not whole
I don’t know if you understand the depth of this relationship
You were sent to me from above by an angel
I can’t help but feel that this can’t continue
It just seems to good to be true
Your love does something to me
Something that I’ve never felt before
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 2 [informant] => pickles99 [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

We can make it

Contributed by pickles99 on Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

It’s the passion in your expression
It’s the kindness in your voice
It’s the way you look at me
It’s not even my choice
You control the way I feel, like it or not
Your effect on me has been so deep
In reality you know you have my heart
Even when I pretend that my feelings for you have disappeared
I just can’t seem to be strong
Our love was meant to be
I speak without a doubt
Never regretting, not even a single day with you
Some days I think it’s over
Some days I believe we’re not going to make it
But I just can’t seem to convince myself
That our love can not hold out
Your love is my protection
Without you I’m not whole
I don’t know if you understand the depth of this relationship
You were sent to me from above by an angel
I can’t help but feel that this can’t continue
It just seems to good to be true
Your love does something to me
Something that I’ve never felt before

Copyright Â© pickles99 ... [ 2002-10-12 15:30:00]
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Re: We can make it (User Rating: 1 )
by Kirby on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 06:36:00 PM AEST
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This is obviously a good poem but it is typical. I've even written a few like this. Bring more adversity into your poetry. Other then that this poem was very sweet and it brings back old memories.

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