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Array ( [sid] => 49906 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bereft [time] => 2004-06-01 01:01:28 [hometext] => About losing my first and only love... [bodytext] => I’m suddenly bereft.
Two days ago you were lost
And I was sad cause you weren’t here
Now I’m sad cause you’ve left.
It’s too much to take in
Losing you once was hard,
Losing you twice is cruel –
Finding a love has turned me
Inside out and I feel so messed about…
I feel cheated that what
I’ve looked for is here at last
But I can’t reach the candy from the shelf.
I’m trying so hard and reaching
But only reach the clouds…
I want the stars up above
I want them scattered all around
I want the stars in your eyes
Gazing at me
I need your eyes nearby
Somewhere were I can see
That you’re smiling and that
I put that smile there.
There can be no answers
To the questions I have
Spinning around in my head
And my heart is broken in two.
The one who broke it and the
One that can mend it
It’s only you
That I miss and only you
I would choose to stay
On my deserted island
That is my life.
My life….
My life of unrealised dreams
A life of beauty past
A life with you always in it
In my thoughts and in my prayers
In my waking hours when
I’m sleeping. In every yearning
Cry I ever uttered.
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Bereft

Contributed by evilfairy on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 01:01:28 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I’m suddenly bereft.
Two days ago you were lost
And I was sad cause you weren’t here
Now I’m sad cause you’ve left.
It’s too much to take in
Losing you once was hard,
Losing you twice is cruel –
Finding a love has turned me
Inside out and I feel so messed about…
I feel cheated that what
I’ve looked for is here at last
But I can’t reach the candy from the shelf.
I’m trying so hard and reaching
But only reach the clouds…
I want the stars up above
I want them scattered all around
I want the stars in your eyes
Gazing at me
I need your eyes nearby
Somewhere were I can see
That you’re smiling and that
I put that smile there.
There can be no answers
To the questions I have
Spinning around in my head
And my heart is broken in two.
The one who broke it and the
One that can mend it
It’s only you
That I miss and only you
I would choose to stay
On my deserted island
That is my life.
My life….
My life of unrealised dreams
A life of beauty past
A life with you always in it
In my thoughts and in my prayers
In my waking hours when
I’m sleeping. In every yearning
Cry I ever uttered.




Copyright © evilfairy ... [ 2004-06-01 01:01:28]
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Re: Bereft (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:15:35 AM AEST
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Awwww I'm sorry to hear of your loss, I hope that one day you will again be able to love ,

great poem, with a great sadness attached

pixie xx


Re: Bereft (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:20:39 AM AEST
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Sadness and heartache bleed so plainly from your words...chin up, I hope you're gotten over this.




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