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Array ( [sid] => 49905 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Sacrifice [time] => 2004-06-01 00:56:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Fall on your knees
And beg for your soul.
Scream out your pleas
And release your control.

Walk my fine line
And do not dare stray.
You can taste the fine wine
But I’ll make you pay.

Whisper my name
In your darkest hour
And I’ll warm with the flame.
Your mind I’ll empower.

Worship my being
In your thoughts I will dwell.
Through me you are fleeing
Your reality, your hell.

Direct and steer your path
Always in my direction,
And you need not fear my wrath
I can offer you protection.

Offer me your sacrifice
Now is your only chance.
I ask only for your life
To be delivered into my hands.
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Your Sacrifice

Contributed by evilfairy on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 12:56:54 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Fall on your knees
And beg for your soul.
Scream out your pleas
And release your control.

Walk my fine line
And do not dare stray.
You can taste the fine wine
But I’ll make you pay.

Whisper my name
In your darkest hour
And I’ll warm with the flame.
Your mind I’ll empower.

Worship my being
In your thoughts I will dwell.
Through me you are fleeing
Your reality, your hell.

Direct and steer your path
Always in my direction,
And you need not fear my wrath
I can offer you protection.

Offer me your sacrifice
Now is your only chance.
I ask only for your life
To be delivered into my hands.

Copyright Â© evilfairy ... [ 2004-06-01 00:56:54]
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Re: Your Sacrifice (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 01:09:41 AM AEST
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gripping this almost could scarrrrrrrrrrrreeee me great job
Michelle

Re: Your Sacrifice (User Rating: 1 )
by brigitte7735 on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 01:57:01 AM AEST
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I know this is dark, but this so captures how i feel about religion

Vanessa

Re: Your Sacrifice (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 02:07:31 AM AEST
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It was written along those lines vanessa...
not necessarily how i feel all the time tho - just thinking...

evilfairy

Re: Your Sacrifice (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:17:28 AM AEST
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now this is what I call dark, trully great piece of work here evilfairy.

pixie xx

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