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Array ( [sid] => 49896 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I finally see [time] => 2004-05-31 23:43:11 [hometext] => THIS IS ABOUT FINALLY SEEING MYSELF THROUGH ANOTHER EYES [bodytext] => today i finally saw me in your eyes
and i was standing out and not in a disguise
not hiding behind words that shield my soul
risking my self and all my disciplined control
but it was nice, to step outside the box today
your words brought me out this way
to see in your vision, the person that you see
it was overwhelming and touching to me
i dont normally trust all that people say
but your sincereity touched my soul, in a warm way
to read about someone so sweet an realize its me
its the person, that i dont really see
but i love knowing, you see all that in me
always saying sweet things that make my day
your kindness and love, is something i can never repay
so know, that these words were written especially for you
and the wonderful things you say to get me through
for not giving up and staying by my side
you my dear brother have filled me with pride
i have never had anyone believe in me as you do
i just want you to know, how blessed i feel to have you
who always and i mean always comes through
I thank God for blessing me with you.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 354 [topic] => 43 [informant] => desire [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
I finally see

Contributed by desire on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 11:43:11 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



today i finally saw me in your eyes
and i was standing out and not in a disguise
not hiding behind words that shield my soul
risking my self and all my disciplined control
but it was nice, to step outside the box today
your words brought me out this way
to see in your vision, the person that you see
it was overwhelming and touching to me
i dont normally trust all that people say
but your sincereity touched my soul, in a warm way
to read about someone so sweet an realize its me
its the person, that i dont really see
but i love knowing, you see all that in me
always saying sweet things that make my day
your kindness and love, is something i can never repay
so know, that these words were written especially for you
and the wonderful things you say to get me through
for not giving up and staying by my side
you my dear brother have filled me with pride
i have never had anyone believe in me as you do
i just want you to know, how blessed i feel to have you
who always and i mean always comes through
I thank God for blessing me with you.





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Re: I finally see (User Rating: 1 )
by JadedExistence on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 12:33:28 AM AEST
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An amazing gift to be able to see yourself as others do. Something I wish I could do every once in awhile. Good write.
~JadedExistence~


Re: I finally see (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 12:49:50 AM AEST
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super moment of self discovery this is awesome
Michelle




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