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Hold me all day and through the night.

Lets just think about today and not tomorrow.
Tomorrow you will be leaving and I will be filled with sorrow.
Tomorrow will come soon and you will leave.
It is something I refuse to believe.
Put your arms around me and hold me tight.
Hold me all day and through the night.

I am scared for the sun to come up and bring apon the new day.
Please just look me in the eyes and say you can stay.
Please, please dont leave me to be alone again.
I dont think my broken heart could mend.
So just put your arms around me and hold me tight.
Hold me all day and through the night. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 312 [topic] => 48 [informant] => matts_sweetie_04 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Hold Me

Contributed by matts_sweetie_04 on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 10:50:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Put your arms around me and hold me tight.
Hold me all day and through the night.

Lets just think about today and not tomorrow.
Tomorrow you will be leaving and I will be filled with sorrow.
Tomorrow will come soon and you will leave.
It is something I refuse to believe.
Put your arms around me and hold me tight.
Hold me all day and through the night.

I am scared for the sun to come up and bring apon the new day.
Please just look me in the eyes and say you can stay.
Please, please dont leave me to be alone again.
I dont think my broken heart could mend.
So just put your arms around me and hold me tight.
Hold me all day and through the night.

Copyright © matts_sweetie_04 ... [ 2004-05-31 22:50:08]
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Re: Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by JadedExistence on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 11:02:57 PM AEST
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(((((matts_sweetie_04)))))
A great write, a lot of sadness and longing. I can't imagine what it must be like to have someone you love leaving all the time for the army and I wish you all the happiness in the coming time while he is here and after he leaves again.
~JadedExistence~

Re: Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by jbrow on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 11:03:36 PM AEST
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very good
p's
Gene

Re: Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 01:28:08 AM AEST
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I feel for you and Im praying along with you they will all be heading for home soon this time to stay blessings to you both
Michelle

Re: Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:34:40 AM AEST
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thats really sad, i'm sorry about how you felt. must hurt. It's a good poem though.

Re: Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:20:19 AM AEST
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brought a tear to my eye while reading this, I can almsot feel your pain,

very well expressed,

takecare
Pixie xx

Re: Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 12:10:45 AM AEST
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you have a very lucky someone!!! another great poem A+++

Re: Hold Me (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 01:00:53 PM AEST
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This is sad...but very good

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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