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Array ( [sid] => 49883 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => what you do to me [time] => 2004-05-31 21:35:45 [hometext] => I wrote this awhile ago...hope you all like this.....I need any advice that you can give [bodytext] => You told me you loved me but it was all lies
Everytime you call me I start to cry
Even my heart dies

The pain hurts deep inside
Now your love is like a hundred knifes
stabbing in every where...even my thys

Why do you do this ?
It hurts so much
what if someone did you the same way
Would you cry as much ?

I hate what you did
and thats the worst part

So the story is
you lied, cried, and wanted to die

I love you still but it seems you don't love me back
god this hurts sooo much !!!!!!! will you take me back ?? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 260 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Alliyah [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

what you do to me

Contributed by Alliyah on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 09:35:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You told me you loved me but it was all lies
Everytime you call me I start to cry
Even my heart dies

The pain hurts deep inside
Now your love is like a hundred knifes
stabbing in every where...even my thys

Why do you do this ?
It hurts so much
what if someone did you the same way
Would you cry as much ?

I hate what you did
and thats the worst part

So the story is
you lied, cried, and wanted to die

I love you still but it seems you don't love me back
god this hurts sooo much !!!!!!! will you take me back ??

Copyright © Alliyah ... [ 2004-05-31 21:35:45]
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Re: what you do to me (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 02:34:03 AM AEST
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sounds self-destructive. if there is that much pain, i would want to be rid of the source. looking back all the time is such a hinderance to looking ahead. nice write, though.
thanks for sharing

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