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I'm Not Sleeping
Contributed by
LittleWillow
on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:19:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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do not try to wake me
my soul's escaped the fear
do not try to take me
I'm not really here
I've hurt for so long
now I'll no longer cry
I've passed through all the wrong
all the lies have dried
my soul has gone creeping
do not shake my head
I'm not sleeping
I'm merely dead
Copyright ©
LittleWillow
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2004-05-31 19:19:41]
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Re: I'm Not Sleeping
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:23:25 PM AEST
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| deep... I love it! great write. A++++ |
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Re: I'm Not Sleeping
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by Luinil on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:34:07 PM AEST
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| very very powerful, you did a great job |
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Re: I'm Not Sleeping
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by Saitou-sama on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 10:24:35 PM AEST
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| Wow. For some reason, this brought tears to my eyes. Great write. |
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Re: I'm Not Sleeping
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:08:40 AM AEST
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So I suppose a date's out of the question? Alright, alright, a sweet, punchy poem of the metaphysical genre. Sad, a little angry, an interesting blend of defeat and resolve. Poignet and heartfelt. A good write.
Spike |
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Re: I'm Not Sleeping
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:45:49 AM AEST
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wow, this is such a powerful poem for a short one , very good write,
pixie xx |
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