Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	01-June 12:41:12 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 49863 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Courage [time] => 2004-05-31 18:54:57 [hometext] => sort of a follow up on a previous poem... comments and suggestions welcome [bodytext] => Courage my brothers and sisters,
Courage through the fight
Cry out to the red rising sun
March the blood-drenched ground at night

Battle is near at hand
Yield no mercy on your rival
Swinging blades sing success
Fight for king, not for survival

Let fear fade from your eyes
Seize your fate on the field
Let valor surge through your veins
Through your hands, your sword, your shield

Cut down ravenous tyranny
Let loose your searing rage
Let fly your fiery arrows
Unleash your vicious rampage

Scarlet sun rises and sets
Peace is near, not yet in sight
Courage friend, you endured the day
Courage, tomorrow we end this fight.
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Luinil [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Courage

Contributed by Luinil on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 06:54:57 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Courage my brothers and sisters,
Courage through the fight
Cry out to the red rising sun
March the blood-drenched ground at night

Battle is near at hand
Yield no mercy on your rival
Swinging blades sing success
Fight for king, not for survival

Let fear fade from your eyes
Seize your fate on the field
Let valor surge through your veins
Through your hands, your sword, your shield

Cut down ravenous tyranny
Let loose your searing rage
Let fly your fiery arrows
Unleash your vicious rampage

Scarlet sun rises and sets
Peace is near, not yet in sight
Courage friend, you endured the day
Courage, tomorrow we end this fight.

Copyright © Luinil ... [ 2004-05-31 18:54:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Courage (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:09:34 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Nice write, has a great flow to it and very creative ryhmes. A++++

Re: Courage (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:09:59 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

War is such a burden for all involved. If you do have to fight one though, then fight with everything you have to win it. Excellent piece of work.

Rita

Re: Courage (User Rating: 1 )
by mdmorash on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 11:21:23 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Nicely done. I like the imagry, and the flow of the message.

Re: Courage (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:17:15 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Good poem I might be talking to a christain tell me if that is true.

Re: Courage (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:17:22 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Good poem I might be talking to a christain tell me if that is true.

Re: Courage (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:17:23 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Good poem I might be talking to a christain tell me if that is true.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com