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All Alone

Contributed by Jishes_4_ever on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 06:44:06 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I'm lying here
All alone
No one near
To hear me scream

The pain is increasing
And I can't stop the bleeding
I cut to deep
I wasn't thinking

What have I done?
I've slowly begun
To destroy my life
As the blood drains from my body.

There's no one around
It's only me
Will they make it in time?
Or will I die here all alone?




Copyright © Jishes_4_ever ... [ 2004-05-31 18:44:06]
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Re: All Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:06:24 PM AEST
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all alone is a horrible feeling... but you expressed your feelings really beautifully... hang in there


Re: All Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:32:51 PM AEST
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I often feel the same.. alas im sure many on YPDC can relate. great write!


Re: All Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by LoVeLy_4_StEvE on Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 10:28:18 PM AEST
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I thought this was a really lovely write. You did a very good job on expressing you thoughts. Keep up the good work.

Hugs
~*Brit*~


Re: All Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by spider on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 05:32:55 PM AEST
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one of those really saddenning writes. i've gone from being uber happy from one other you wrote to being all sad uz of this one. you really portray emotion well. im sure your other poems are just as good as these, when i've got more time i'll r&r them




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