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Me
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 06:36:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Negative
annoying
pessimistic
*****.
Crazy little
psychopath
thinking
dark things.
Ignored
freak
in the corner,
arms around her legs.
Loves to cry
crimson tears,
so she cried an
ocean.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-05-31 18:36:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Luinil on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:16:27 PM AEST (User
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i think the shortness and fragmented style of this poem makes it really really powerful... it's a great expression... i know how you feel, good job |
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Re: Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 07:28:39 PM AEST (User
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The expressed content of this poem is sad and I hope things look up for you soon. The written poem and structure is original and enjoyable. Few words, much emotion expressed. Great work.
Rita |
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Re: Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Saitou-sama on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 10:28:55 PM AEST (User
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This is one of my favorites. It's amazing how much pain you can convey in such few lines. I'm sorry you had to feel this way. I've been there. In fact, I'm still there. ::hugs:: I hope it'll get better. |
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Re: Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by StrangeLittleGirl on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:48:43 AM AEST (User
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Really powerful. Your poems are brilliant, yet so sad. Try and smile sometimes though, you have alot of talent! :) |
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Re: Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 04:45:34 AM AEST (User
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This is so awesome, short and sweet, luv the ending. P.M. me if ya eva wanna talk. |
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