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Array ( [sid] => 49847 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm The Control [time] => 2004-05-31 15:12:04 [hometext] => This describes my battle with anorexia. Everyone always talks about 'the voice' well here is the voice speaking out. It is kind of hard to explain but if you read it you might understand it. If you dont oh well I guess. [bodytext] => Hey look over here at me.
I'm right here look and see.
Don't look too hard though
You might see something that isn’t supposed to show
I'm a distraction, think about this
Imagine living a life of bliss
I might allow you to see the truth
But for now hide in a booth
Hey don't look away
In your mind I must stay
I wont let you forget
I'm the one that allowed you to sit
You have lost all control
With happiness, you must pay the toll
You don't control anyone
I control everyone
But the difference between them and you
You are too weak, you need me to stay true
Now listen here
I won't let you look in a mirror
You must pay attention now
Otherwise you will be a fat cow
This is the only warning I will give
Stay true to me, if you want to live. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 268 [topic] => 61 [informant] => perfection [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
I'm The Control

Contributed by perfection on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 03:12:04 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Hey look over here at me.
I'm right here look and see.
Don't look too hard though
You might see something that isn’t supposed to show
I'm a distraction, think about this
Imagine living a life of bliss
I might allow you to see the truth
But for now hide in a booth
Hey don't look away
In your mind I must stay
I wont let you forget
I'm the one that allowed you to sit
You have lost all control
With happiness, you must pay the toll
You don't control anyone
I control everyone
But the difference between them and you
You are too weak, you need me to stay true
Now listen here
I won't let you look in a mirror
You must pay attention now
Otherwise you will be a fat cow
This is the only warning I will give
Stay true to me, if you want to live.




Copyright © perfection ... [ 2004-05-31 15:12:04]
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Re: I'm The Control (User Rating: 1 )
by Suz on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 03:19:21 PM AEST
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Poor sweetie. This is an awesome poem. I hope you're doing better.

I'm already a fat cow... moo.
Alright that wasn't funny. But I like your poem.


Re: I'm The Control (User Rating: 1 )
by Colleen on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 03:25:11 PM AEST
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That was a really awesome poem! I have friends who have gone through the same thing, so it is good to know how they were seeing things. Thanks for a better understanding!




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