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Array ( [sid] => 49831 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Freak [time] => 2004-05-31 13:42:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I am the one locked away I am the freak,
I have no face and I can not speak,
But if I could talk I would say hurtful things,
And if I had a face I know people would cringe.

I am deep down where no-one can see,
And believe it or not this is where I like to be,
Down here I possess all kinds of power,
Out there I would be as vulnerable as a flower.

I am staying put for all eternity,
Locked away in this non existent captivity,
Hidden away from the big cruel world,
From all the lovely boys and girls.

If I were ever to be unleashed,
Pure havoc on earth would be wreaked,
I will never be allowed out of my cage,
Never to show everyone my true potential rage.

I’m quite used to my dark domain,
Because in here I can not inflict any pain,
I feed on thoughts and feelings of adrenalin,
I take them in here and drink from within.

I have no friends and I live alone,
In my dungeon, that I call home,
All day I sit and all through the night,
Conjuring up ways to let others hear my plight.

The screams I let out are inside my head,
As I lay thrashing about in this horrifying death bed,
No-one will hear me, not now and not ever,
Here I will stay with nothing to sever.

My insides are twisted and mangled with fear,
But I am isolated and nothing comes near,
I am the one locked away I am the freak,
I have no face and I can not speak.

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The Freak

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 01:42:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I am the one locked away I am the freak,
I have no face and I can not speak,
But if I could talk I would say hurtful things,
And if I had a face I know people would cringe.

I am deep down where no-one can see,
And believe it or not this is where I like to be,
Down here I possess all kinds of power,
Out there I would be as vulnerable as a flower.

I am staying put for all eternity,
Locked away in this non existent captivity,
Hidden away from the big cruel world,
From all the lovely boys and girls.

If I were ever to be unleashed,
Pure havoc on earth would be wreaked,
I will never be allowed out of my cage,
Never to show everyone my true potential rage.

I’m quite used to my dark domain,
Because in here I can not inflict any pain,
I feed on thoughts and feelings of adrenalin,
I take them in here and drink from within.

I have no friends and I live alone,
In my dungeon, that I call home,
All day I sit and all through the night,
Conjuring up ways to let others hear my plight.

The screams I let out are inside my head,
As I lay thrashing about in this horrifying death bed,
No-one will hear me, not now and not ever,
Here I will stay with nothing to sever.

My insides are twisted and mangled with fear,
But I am isolated and nothing comes near,
I am the one locked away I am the freak,
I have no face and I can not speak.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-05-31 13:42:05]
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Re: The Freak (User Rating: 1 )
by Colleen on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 02:04:34 PM AEST
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That is a really amazing poem! I am sorry that you feel that way...

Re: The Freak (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 04:54:41 PM AEST
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really good poem there
i echo how you feel, i feel so much the same
ever need to talk you can talk to me
once again good poem

tweeky

Re: The Freak (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:03:51 AM AEST
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This will no doubt sound corny but reading this, it's like you're speaking to my soul, I know the feeling you're conveying here. Well done, it's a very emotional and expressive poem.

Re: The Freak (User Rating: 1 )
by Princesaazul16 on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:51:48 AM AEST
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Nice. I love how you explain yourself in your poems. It's great. I always look forward to reading them. Keep up the good work!
~Stace~

Re: The Freak (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 01:32:42 PM AEST
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I think this one is one of your best, Pixie. I can really relate to this one. It is very deep and dark, and that's what I like. I simply love it!!!

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