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Array ( [sid] => 49810 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Letter [time] => 2004-05-31 10:17:50 [hometext] => Though I die, my love letter remains evermore in your mind [bodytext] => If you are reading what I am trying to say now
Well, my dear friend, for you it is too late
For what you read within these lifeless eyes
Has run its due course, and mingled with fate

I loved you dearly, yet you were very much blind
You couldn’t see the forest for the trees, it seemed
I watched you over the years love everyone but me
Whilst I smiled on the outside, inside my voices screamed

I desired the only thing that my heart couldn’t have
I didn’t tell a soul, for I knew they wouldn’t understand
For you had always belonged to someone else
Forever leaving my emotions within a dire wasteland

My letter of love for you will be written in crimson ink
Penned on weathered skin, leaving no room for error
Signed, sealed and delivered with a swift metallic score
The solemn last words from me that will last forever

Though I die, my love letter remains evermore in your mind
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 36 [informant] => emphaticplacebo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Love Letter

Contributed by emphaticplacebo on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 10:17:50 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

If you are reading what I am trying to say now
Well, my dear friend, for you it is too late
For what you read within these lifeless eyes
Has run its due course, and mingled with fate

I loved you dearly, yet you were very much blind
You couldn’t see the forest for the trees, it seemed
I watched you over the years love everyone but me
Whilst I smiled on the outside, inside my voices screamed

I desired the only thing that my heart couldn’t have
I didn’t tell a soul, for I knew they wouldn’t understand
For you had always belonged to someone else
Forever leaving my emotions within a dire wasteland

My letter of love for you will be written in crimson ink
Penned on weathered skin, leaving no room for error
Signed, sealed and delivered with a swift metallic score
The solemn last words from me that will last forever

Though I die, my love letter remains evermore in your mind

Copyright Â© emphaticplacebo ... [ 2004-05-31 10:17:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Love Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by Saitou-sama on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 10:40:42 PM AEST
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Beautiful, with that tainted morbid side. Excellent.

Re: Love Letter (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 11:42:55 PM AEST
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Wow written with a cold finality that sent a
shiver down my spine. I don't think it needed
that last line because the line before it just
ends the write perfectly other than that this
poem was sad, dark and just plain
awesome. Amazing my friend.

Bobo (Joel)

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