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Array ( [sid] => 49808 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forever Returning [time] => 2004-05-31 10:14:09 [hometext] => Hmm, I know I know, It's scatty and bitty and doesn't make sense. I'll try explain. The part about the walls are about my memory or the wall in my cupboard. The rest is about writing things down. Hope that helps.. [bodytext] => Scribbled heart diagrams,
Painted with purple ink,
Ruled out by a stray tear,
A name written in pencil lead,
Across a hidden wall,
Reminders of hate, hidden,
Behind a closed door.

Blurry eyed from gazing,
Far too long at the sun,
Not a single blink,
Escapes watery eyes,
I'm forever painting hate,
Upon my memory with care,
With names branded eternally,
To my imaginary wall.

I always write your name,
Repeat it into it's hundreds,
Watch it fall from the lines,
And drip from these pages,
Return to the ink of my pen,
My hate, never-ending,
Drifts and fades,
Constantly returning in floods,
You name will forever scold my tongue. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 48 [informant] => sweet-poison [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Forever Returning

Contributed by sweet-poison on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 10:14:09 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Scribbled heart diagrams,
Painted with purple ink,
Ruled out by a stray tear,
A name written in pencil lead,
Across a hidden wall,
Reminders of hate, hidden,
Behind a closed door.

Blurry eyed from gazing,
Far too long at the sun,
Not a single blink,
Escapes watery eyes,
I'm forever painting hate,
Upon my memory with care,
With names branded eternally,
To my imaginary wall.

I always write your name,
Repeat it into it's hundreds,
Watch it fall from the lines,
And drip from these pages,
Return to the ink of my pen,
My hate, never-ending,
Drifts and fades,
Constantly returning in floods,
You name will forever scold my tongue.

Copyright © sweet-poison ... [ 2004-05-31 10:14:09]
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Re: Forever Returning (User Rating: 1 )
by Kusko on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:32:03 AM AEST
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passionate.
I love it.
Great job!

Re: Forever Returning (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 06:55:06 PM AEST
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Well kay, I must admit, it took me quite few reads to understand this poem, but hey! Once I did, gosh every single lines of it seems so.....hmmm........what is the word for it.......so.........errr...........well, you know what I try to say right?^_^ Hehe well it is definately good, I would rank this as one of your best works! Who say you run out of inspiration?!^_^

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