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Array ( [sid] => 49783 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I won't let you die [time] => 2004-05-31 05:26:47 [hometext] => I wrote this 4 years ago, so it's pretty old but, hey. [bodytext] => How can you take the pain when it’s all just a lie?
Why do you let them hurt you and make you cry?
I’ve been there before and I feel your pain
To watch you go through it is experiencing it again
But everyday to myself I say:
Don’t let them depress you, it’ll hurt you more
Don’t let them see you crying on the cold floor

No one deserves this pain I see
I cant let them get to me
I look in the mirror and see a girl
Crying in her cold dark world
Nothing to look forward to
And nothing anyone can do
I don’t want to live this life
Please hold on, don’t let me die

They won’t ever see my tears
They won’t ever sense my fears
I’ll never ever let them see
The knife in my back is killing me
But everyday to myself I say:
Don’t let them depress you, it’ll hurt you more
Don’t let them see you crying on the floor

No one deserves the pain you feel
No human being is made of steel
I’ll let you cry if you cry with me
I’ll kill for you, I’ll set you free
Please don’t let them get to you; you’re worth so much more
Don’t let them see you crying, on the cold dead floor

No one deserves this pain I see
I can’t let them get to me
You can’t let them get to you
Don’t let the pain get through
I won’t let them make you cry
I won’t leave you or let you die
I’ll be your friend I’ll stop the pain
I’ll be your shelter when it rains

Hold out your hand, and take in mine
I won’t cry, no I won’t cry
I hold nothing, I hold no hand
You weren’t there to understand
Please don’t cry, oh please don’t cry
Even though you let me die. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 61 [informant] => carmen_queasy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
I won't let you die

Contributed by carmen_queasy on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 05:26:47 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



How can you take the pain when it’s all just a lie?
Why do you let them hurt you and make you cry?
I’ve been there before and I feel your pain
To watch you go through it is experiencing it again
But everyday to myself I say:
Don’t let them depress you, it’ll hurt you more
Don’t let them see you crying on the cold floor

No one deserves this pain I see
I cant let them get to me
I look in the mirror and see a girl
Crying in her cold dark world
Nothing to look forward to
And nothing anyone can do
I don’t want to live this life
Please hold on, don’t let me die

They won’t ever see my tears
They won’t ever sense my fears
I’ll never ever let them see
The knife in my back is killing me
But everyday to myself I say:
Don’t let them depress you, it’ll hurt you more
Don’t let them see you crying on the floor

No one deserves the pain you feel
No human being is made of steel
I’ll let you cry if you cry with me
I’ll kill for you, I’ll set you free
Please don’t let them get to you; you’re worth so much more
Don’t let them see you crying, on the cold dead floor

No one deserves this pain I see
I can’t let them get to me
You can’t let them get to you
Don’t let the pain get through
I won’t let them make you cry
I won’t leave you or let you die
I’ll be your friend I’ll stop the pain
I’ll be your shelter when it rains

Hold out your hand, and take in mine
I won’t cry, no I won’t cry
I hold nothing, I hold no hand
You weren’t there to understand
Please don’t cry, oh please don’t cry
Even though you let me die.




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Re: I won't let you die (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 05:44:25 AM AEST
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You have courage to face reality...not weak in spirit..well written..venkat


Re: I won't let you die (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 06:09:59 AM AEST
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This poem is a good one.


Re: I won't let you die (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 12:31:58 PM AEST
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A very sincere write...well done!

Blessings
From, Jenna




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