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Tears fall like raindrops
From a soul filled with fear
Fear of darkness within
Both far and so near.

Darkness shrouded
By a smiling face
Living in turmoil
This pain that I face.

Granting the pain
To do as it's dark deed
My body and mind
Succomb to it's greed.

It takes me down deeper
To fear and to shame
Depths I can't fathom
As I feel it's dark reign.

Life as I know it
May soon cease to be
For the pain that laid dormant
Is now free in me.

It ravages corners
And every inch of my soul
It tears me to shreds
With a heart black as coal.

This pain is alive
I can feel it within
My spirit not willing
To try and stop it again.

I give in to pleasure
That is twisted and dark
This pain that's within
Will soon leave it's mark.

The mark that it leaves
Will be what it does crave
The mark on my tombstone
As I lay in my grave.

In this grave of my doing
That I chose to be
For allowing this torture
To fester in me.

Life holds no meaning
When hate fear and pain
Are seething inside you
With no good to gain.

So come now the sickness
That I so doth crave
And swallow my body
Within your dark grave.

Don't cry for me
As I lay in the ground
I live now in peace
That in life was not found.

I hold no more fear
No pain or no hate
I lay still in victory
With death as my mate.

Crying eyes no more here
My tears are now dried
As I lay in the darkness
That I lived with inside.

My soul is not hurting
My fear is now gone
As my lifeblood stops flowing
In this life of new dawn.

A dawn of beginning
Of a new shining sun
Only seen by the departed
Of which I am now one.

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THE ~ DARKNESS ~ INSIDE

Contributed by AnGeL_M on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 05:42:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Tears fall like raindrops
From a soul filled with fear
Fear of darkness within
Both far and so near.

Darkness shrouded
By a smiling face
Living in turmoil
This pain that I face.

Granting the pain
To do as it's dark deed
My body and mind
Succomb to it's greed.

It takes me down deeper
To fear and to shame
Depths I can't fathom
As I feel it's dark reign.

Life as I know it
May soon cease to be
For the pain that laid dormant
Is now free in me.

It ravages corners
And every inch of my soul
It tears me to shreds
With a heart black as coal.

This pain is alive
I can feel it within
My spirit not willing
To try and stop it again.

I give in to pleasure
That is twisted and dark
This pain that's within
Will soon leave it's mark.

The mark that it leaves
Will be what it does crave
The mark on my tombstone
As I lay in my grave.

In this grave of my doing
That I chose to be
For allowing this torture
To fester in me.

Life holds no meaning
When hate fear and pain
Are seething inside you
With no good to gain.

So come now the sickness
That I so doth crave
And swallow my body
Within your dark grave.

Don't cry for me
As I lay in the ground
I live now in peace
That in life was not found.

I hold no more fear
No pain or no hate
I lay still in victory
With death as my mate.

Crying eyes no more here
My tears are now dried
As I lay in the darkness
That I lived with inside.

My soul is not hurting
My fear is now gone
As my lifeblood stops flowing
In this life of new dawn.

A dawn of beginning
Of a new shining sun
Only seen by the departed
Of which I am now one.

Copyright © AnGeL_M ... [ 2004-05-30 17:42:04]
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Re: THE ~ DARKNESS ~ INSIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 06:33:46 PM AEST
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great emotion. I feel this way more often than I like. great read!!

Re: THE ~ DARKNESS ~ INSIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:11:28 PM AEST
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This is well done, Angel..tho I must admit, I'm not into dark poetry...
Hope all is well..
Jenni

Re: THE ~ DARKNESS ~ INSIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:45:17 PM AEST
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your poem is very intriguing and moving. an excellent write to show off your talents.

Re: THE ~ DARKNESS ~ INSIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by dragon on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 11:32:18 PM AEST
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Well written, good poem, I hope all is well
dragon

Re: THE ~ DARKNESS ~ INSIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 01:54:41 AM AEST
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The poem is wrapped with great lines..
"A dawn of beginning Of a new shining sun
Only seen by the departed Of which I am now one"...hugs my friend. venkat

Re: THE ~ DARKNESS ~ INSIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 02:48:25 AM AEST
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written so wonderful yet tinged with great sadness
Michelle

Re: THE ~ DARKNESS ~ INSIDE (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 03:45:06 AM AEST
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This is an excellent write ... it expresses your grief well, and then your faith at the end ... very well done, Jan

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