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Array ( [sid] => 49718 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => bullet [time] => 2004-05-30 12:21:30 [hometext] => A thought of many days pass [bodytext] => Sometimes
I get an urge
To put a bullet thru my hand,
My shoulder
Just to feel the pain
The only thing I understand

Needles work
But not the same
INK drys
PIERCING close
In a day
I feel no change

It sucks how emotions are all inside
And no one can feel my rain

I write day in
Day out
Trying to relay the shame
All the way up into my brain

With the lack there of chemicals that blame
It's not my fault
I'm not so saine
Maybe tomorrow I can feel the pain

ARH--Huh

Cutting tools don't please the psyche
I need a bullet
All praised in silver
Sunken thru flesh
Lossing speed with the rain

I hate it when I get this way
But something has to feel okay

This love
This hate
Emotions overrate
Give me a knife
But that's to late
Give me a bullet
That's the fate
So I can assure
I'm okay [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 13 [informant] => rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

bullet

Contributed by rhei76 on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:21:30 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Sometimes
I get an urge
To put a bullet thru my hand,
My shoulder
Just to feel the pain
The only thing I understand

Needles work
But not the same
INK drys
PIERCING close
In a day
I feel no change

It sucks how emotions are all inside
And no one can feel my rain

I write day in
Day out
Trying to relay the shame
All the way up into my brain

With the lack there of chemicals that blame
It's not my fault
I'm not so saine
Maybe tomorrow I can feel the pain

ARH--Huh

Cutting tools don't please the psyche
I need a bullet
All praised in silver
Sunken thru flesh
Lossing speed with the rain

I hate it when I get this way
But something has to feel okay

This love
This hate
Emotions overrate
Give me a knife
But that's to late
Give me a bullet
That's the fate
So I can assure
I'm okay

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2004-05-30 12:21:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: bullet (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:41:29 PM AEST
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very dark and emotional,

very well written tho,

pixie xx

Re: bullet (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:46:40 PM AEST
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its sad that you feel this way, but i can emagine how you feel though, or atleast i think i can.
this is a great poem. don't let your talent go to waste!

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